Westbound should really appeal to the Undertalers! There is no way AI could generate this, but since you're using it to "clean it up" AI is definitely becoming better from your input!
Coin-Cruncher needs to be redone, but it will be easy to do. The dealbreaker is the hook is too long. It should be something like "Pac-Man meets roguelike!". Under 7 words, short and snappy that grabs someone's attention. The 10-second pitch and Elevator pitch should be half as long, but those are not deal-breakers. Please republish.
These are great improvements to the Pac-Man type. Would love to be on the team that makes this!
"One might turn coins into mass—now you grow bigger instead of richer. Another leaves a poisonous snail trail behind you—great if something’s chasing you, but now you’ve gotta be careful not to trap yourself. Maybe you pick up a shooting upgrade, then a blast radius one, and suddenly you’re blowing through walls and discovering secret rooms. This system should be the focus—wild combos and clever synergies. "
I'll have to demo Binding of Isaac for you one of these days. By the same guy who did Super Meat Boy. Still one of the best "roguelikes" I keep yammering about lol
● The MIB Director? An alien. ● The President? Three aliens in a trench coat. ● Your partner? …Better not think about it. ● You? That’s ridiculous. Right? RIGHT?!
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Storage Stackers is looking good.
Westbound is good to go
Westbound should really appeal to the Undertalers! There is no way AI could generate this, but since you're using it to "clean it up" AI is definitely becoming better from your input!
Fired is truly diabolical 😲I "fear" it'd be a real hit
Fired! is good to go!
Coin-Cruncher needs to be redone, but it will be easy to do. The dealbreaker is the hook is too long. It should be something like "Pac-Man meets roguelike!". Under 7 words, short and snappy that grabs someone's attention. The 10-second pitch and Elevator pitch should be half as long, but those are not deal-breakers. Please republish.
Will do!
by-the-way, a resubmit can be done anytime up until the deadline. no need to do it today.
Awesome!
These are great improvements to the Pac-Man type. Would love to be on the team that makes this!
"One might turn coins into mass—now you grow bigger instead of richer. Another leaves a poisonous snail trail behind you—great if something’s chasing you, but now you’ve gotta be careful not to trap yourself. Maybe you pick up a shooting upgrade, then a blast radius one, and suddenly you’re blowing through walls and discovering secret rooms. This system should be the focus—wild combos and clever synergies. "
I'll have to demo Binding of Isaac for you one of these days. By the same guy who did Super Meat Boy. Still one of the best "roguelikes" I keep yammering about lol
I must have played the demo at one time as I am familiar with it. https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/581168
GDevelop has a template with a similar room mechanic that brought it to mind too.
The fact Edmund McMillen did 40+ games (NSFW) before Super Meat Boy is oddly encouraging to me.
Gravekeeper is my favorite so far. Gardener by day, zombie coraller by night!
Thanks! Mine too!
MIB MIA. Cool! 3/22
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● The MIB Director? An alien. ● The President? Three aliens in a trench coat. ● Your partner? …Better not think about it. ● You? That’s ridiculous. Right? RIGHT?!
LOVE IT!!!
Nice! Keeping the pace!
100% & 100%. These are exciting ideas. In the future, it's easier for me if you use specific labels:
Man, either one of these is such a stellar idea! You are on track for game designer. You have 2 of 3 lives left.
Thanks, and will do!