I was glad to see a story centered on the Ghostly Undead. Nice story.

I really enjoyed the writing style and the characters. the way Bartholomew and Alastayr are written really make them come to life.

I loved the world-building in your story!

I enjoyed this story a lot, especially the Saint Bartholomew character voice, which I thought was very well done! The one thing that was missing for me was a way to tie it into the game and the setting - I think for this jam, the story would really benefit from being an Age of Fantasy story instead of just a fantasy one. This issue definitely didn't detract from my enjoyment of your story, though - nicely done!

Very good.

thanks for submitting this! Great!

Sweet ending