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A jam submission

Stranger in UtopiaView game page

A brutal murder is committed in the secluded island of Teleia. You're called from the mainland to investigate.
Submitted by Lorenzo (@lrzbn) — 6 hours, 46 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Visuals#15.0005.000
Puzzle Design#14.3334.333
Audio#24.0004.000
Funness#24.6674.667
Overall#24.4444.444
Characters#24.6674.667
Story#44.0004.000

Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.

  • A beautiful game, excellently presented and with an tight, impressive story which plays on difficult themes of today's world. A joy to play. Thank you.
  • Great looking game with an interesting search mechanic and intriguing setting. It very barely incorporates the theme though.
  • A really polished and intriguing Sci-Fi detective story, for a nice game with superb hand-drawn graphics. A game surely not to miss.

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Comments

(+1)

Really good sense of a different world. The blueish-grey tone to everything was a nice choice.

Developer

Thank you!

Submitted(+1)

Very fun and polished game. I got stuck on the apartment door at first. I liked the idea with the tone puzzle, but I ultimately chose the hard of hearing option as it was too hard for me to pickout. It's not a bug exactly, but it would be nice to have a dialog on the load game button. I accidently hit towards the end and had to restart near the beginning. What do you use for the art? I want to make a comic adventure like this at some point using Blender Grease Pencil or Krita maybe. 

Developer

Thank you for the comments here and on the game page, I'll reply to both here.

I'm really happy you enjoyed the game!

Regarding the keypad tone puzzle. I know that for some people these kinds of puzzles are hard (actually, I'm not great at them either!), so I'm glad I included an option to skip them :D

Sorry about the load button! I wanted to have multiple save slots, so clicking the load button would open another interface. Unfortunately for some reason, the save system stopped working and I didn't have enough time to understand why, so I just had a single save slot as a replacement. I also wanted to have autosaves, but that's another thing I had to cut for time reasons. Hopefully, I'll be able to put these things in in a post-jam update.


For the graphics, I used Clip Studio Paint. It's a really good program that has pretty much everything I need for drawing and animation, but it's a commercial product (although it gets regularly discounted).

I don't have a huge experience with Krita, but heard a lot of good things about it. Plus it's free and can do frame-to-frame animation as well.

Grease Pencil looks cool, but I don't know how suitable is for regular illustrations. I've seen some amazing things done with it, but it also inherits Blender's interface which isn't very easy to use.

By the way, I've yet to play Mervin Pissaro (I've been slacking playing jam games lately :D) but it looks really fun!

Submitted(+1)

no problem at all. Just some feedback. Thanks for the info. I have to get into  clip studio or Krita yet. grease pencil is definitely a layer under blenders 3d based stuff but that’s where some of the appeal is for me cause you can edit the structure of your drawing in neat ways if you know what you’re doing. Figuring out basic fills etc is a total pain though so it seems like it should be part of a workflow and not a sole painting tool.

Developer

Yeah, I've seen some amazing stuff done with Blender Grease Pencil,  so it's definitely a powerful tool!

Submitted(+1)

This game is great. I'd say it's comprehensive and 100% pro. Everything here works well, allowing me to fully immerse myself in the story. The design, game mechanics, music, puzzles, atmosphere, story, and message are all exceptional.

Just one small issue: I noticed a word that seems to be misplaced:

But it's a minor detail and doesn't really detract from the overall experience. 

Congratz!

Barnim

Developer

Thank you very much for your comment, JAGS!

The funny thing about that error is that originally I had written "I don't what" and forgot "know". My tester pointed it out... and I corrected it wrongly!!! :D I was a bit too tired at the end of the jam hehe!

I can't upload a new build of the game until voting is over, but that issue will be fixed in a later update for sure. Thanks for pointing it out!

Submitted(+1)

Of course, that's really nothing :)
I just wanted to let you know ;)

Submitted(+1)

I've finished your game and it's great, mate! I love your comic art style and the deep story behind your game! Every game from you is special and this is definitely adventure gem from you. The story is thrilling and makes me to see more. Keep on making awesome games! I've enjoyed every single moment!

Developer(+1)

Thank you very much for your kind words, Ramón! I'm so glad you liked the game. Doctor Volkwein thanks you as well for finding him a suitable name :D

Submitted(+1)

Another very strong entry from Lorenzo.  I'm as astonished by this one as I was about last year's entry in that there's a half an hour of gameplay and some relatively deep mystery given the scope of the thing.  The artwork is as impressive as always as well.  Just a real treat.

Developer

Thank you very much, happy you enjoyed the game!

Looking forward to playing Why the Wrong Face, it looks quirky and fun. Plus, unmistakably EGA.

Submitted(+1)

This was fantastic! Excellent mystery, impressive scope, given the time constraints, beautiful music, and you know I'm a sucker for investigations requiring text parser inputs ;) Oh, and, of course, your art is always wonderful. Brilliant job. I loved it.

Developer(+1)

Thanks again, Kini! You like investigations with text parser input? Who knew? ;)

Congrats again for D-List Diva, super fun game!

Submitted(+1)

Another fantastic game! A great combination of stunning art, intriguing story and engaging puzzles. The computer search was particularly fun - it makes you feel like a real detective. The choice of background music was good too. Very well done!

Developer(+1)

Thank you very much, darqwerful! I'm really glad you enjoyed the game.

The composer will be happy to hear your comment about the music too.

Looking forward to playing your game, I'm ready for more Justin Case adventures! :)

(+1)

Captivating sci-fi setting, great story, interesting gameplay based on searching for keywords. The puzzles are different but satisfying. Well balanced difficulty level. A great entry, as we've come to expect from Lorenzo!

Developer

Thank you very much for your comment, seguso!

I'm glad you enjoyed your game! It was different from my previous games, and because of that, I wasn't sure about its reception. So your comment/mini-review makes me really happy :)