Clever! I liked it!

Absolutely loved this, especially how the Dwarf Guilds were presented. Copying what some others said, could have used better clarity when it came to who was speaking and when, but it wasn't difficult to figure out.

Interesting interpretation of the theme. I appreciate that it's not the POV character who's in this terrible predicament.

Sometimes not making another paragraph when a different person is speaking was indeed jarring somewhat. However, not too much. I could infer who was talking when, but perhaps more clarity is called for.

I enjoyed this submission a lot, can't wait to see what else you do!

Nice flavor. Enjoyed the banter. was a little confused in the last few paragraphs.

Gotta make a profit somehow!

so glad you submitted this, it was a great read, no worries on the formatting, a lot of personality here with the assessor program constantly updating!