love the “mission gone sideways” scenario! Would love to see where this goes next!

That was a really nice story! I really like how easily you introduced the three primary characters and got their personalities across. Very fun read!

Would watch this as a short film. Nice.

And where do their adventures take them now? Tune in next week.... very nice, I liked this, thanks for sharing!

Clear, concise, and a strong sense of tension overall!