Very cool work, and I dig that you decided to use the fever for your source of inspiration and chose to work around it as well. Normally I would say the same thing about cleaning up the mix, however in some ways I feel like the muddiness and heavy distortion in the mid and lower frequencies really adds to the uncomfortable, heavy, and disorienting feeling that comes with fever. So if that's your intention, maybe you can still lean into it a bit. At the end of the day, it entirely depends on your artistic intention. Nice stuff!

You've created a very dense harrowing atmosphere in your track. Would make for a very good loop in a gameplay level!

I agree with most of the other comments on the muddiness in the low end.

This is great for your first time in a DAW! I feel you, I got sick in the last two days of the jam as well. It's good you were able to get something out despite being sick! I love that glitchy sounding synth in the back. Love this rhythm. This is a cool track with good structure, but its a bit muddy. I agree with the tips Jon Odate gave. Great work!

Woah, it's really cool that you still made a song despite trying to learn a daw and getting a fever. Wish you good luck and also better health for the next jam!

Not too bad! My only note would be to make sure to not condense too many instruments in one frequency range. While I think the composition was good the mix was extremely muddy and distorted particularly in the lower range. Try experimenting with the middle and upper ranges if you can and see if it helps make a difference! also just in case try experimenting to see if cutting out the low end on the guitar would help same with the bass but instead cut out the mid and high end (not too much though you don't want to muffle it.

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I think it conveys a feverish mood and the driving rhythm with recurring melody gives an uneasy sense of not knowing how long it will last for.  Neat concept! 

Good job learning your way around the daw! The song's got a good central melody. You might consider working on the mixing on the low end. Thanks for making and sharing.  

Hope you are feeling better!