You have a lot of good comments on your plate already, so I'll quickly chime in with most of the topics. (:

Great use of the black & white gb vibe, great way to animate stuff, soundtrack was fine and gameplay feedback was on truly point. Unfortunately, as you said it yourself, not much more to go with.

Hope to see more of it in the future!

I completely agree with the other comments. What i've seen so far is really good. BUT I need more!! The paper pick up was really cool, the aesthetic is wonderful, and the game world seems very flushed out. 

It's a shame you couldn't complete it in time. This prototype has the capability to be a spooky adventure title. Like others have said, I loved the feel of walking around (espeically the sprite rotation effect) and interacting with the world. The black-and-white Gameboy asethetic is also distinct and interesting. 

Sound effects were on point but the music was more obnoxious than creepy. Also, I think that the character moves a little too slow for my taste. Overall, a great prototype!