Real cool and unique theme here, totally grabbed my attention and is exactly the kind of unexpected game I love to play.  I had a little trouble trying to imagine exactly what play would look like, perhaps some more world building or more details on enemies and bosses would help? Would also be keen to understand how the characters abilities connect with fabric of time, is it just the baddies that have this or do players?

Thanks for making this, this game really stuck in my head after looking through them all. 

You have a creative core idea here and I think the game could be improved a lot by leaning into what's unique about it and not feeling tied to the design of other games. It's a small example but I think you could gain a lot by keeping the unique stats you have laid out here but not mirroring them to the DnD spread. Asking a player to solve a problem with their Bougie stat for example, is a great opportunity to encourage creative roleplay and I feel like having the fallback that you can just use it like Wisdom undercuts what could be really unique about your game. 

I like the idea, but I’m not fully sure what the tie-in with nails is, at least how it matters beyond the initial conceit that you are using nails to change reality? I figured the nails thing would come in with the mechanics a bit more, maybe something about how you do your nails changing what abilities you have?

an interesting and unique setting. Needs rules support and additional content to play. 

I love the tone you set and representing the characters with different sets of nails is an extremely charming and thematic way to sell me on you game.

I agree with the other comment, the biggest snag I encountered reading the character sheet was that I was unsure of how many dice to roll for any given stat! I would love to see those numbers assigned for me or simply give me a total pool of stats to assign myself (My rule of thumb is 18 total divided among all 6 stats for Trash to Treasure). I think setting them up for me feels a little more in line with the usual Havoc Engine pre-gen character style. 

I'd also love to see some little tidbits that help me settle myself in the characters, the name's are excellent, but some titles or a single line of text that gives me a vague personality to jump off of in combination with their stats would really help me dive into play once I pick up their sheet. 

All in all, an excellent read!