I think the previosu comment sums it up quite nicely, It's quite hard to know what you have to do in ceirtan parts of the game, which can sometimes really lose the player and just feels frustrating.

Only thing i'd add is that the soundesign could have been a bit better, the interact sounds are really good, but the train sounds especially the wheels going over something sound was super annoying, for sounds that are gonna repeat alot always use multiple different sound clips and make them randomly loop with slightly different pitches. Also a walking sound would have been really good, much more immersive, even though the train is quite loud, I think a quiet but noticable footstep sound would have made the game much more immersive.

I really like the graphics, I think they look cool but my fps would drop occasionally and it was annoying, I am guessing you used a particle system for the fog/dust that sometimes makes it into the train? Unities particle system is actually quite bad and unoptimized and its better to avoid using so much.

The game is quite good but it is just really slow paced cause its not really clear what the player has to do, I really like the style it looks super rad!!!!

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I think the game has a very nice aesthetic. The choice to make most things in the game animate at a lower FPS is very unique; it gives everything a stop-motion-like feel. The "characters" (the manikins) themselves give me a 90s CG vibe, which I really dig. 90s CG is one of my favorite aesthetics, and I also love trains, so I think it’s a very cool environment.

That said, I think the game needs more work in terms of player guidance and visibility. At the beginning, I was a bit stuck on what I was supposed to do, so I was just walking around in circles until I realized there was a book on a seat. I think if the attendant had said something like “Please take your seat with the others!” I would’ve stayed in that area and found the book more quickly. After getting the book, you receive a key, but I think the key should either be automatically given to the player or make a sound when it drops, because I didn’t notice that I had missed it at first.

Some of the environments are also quite dark. Of course, the flashlight helps with that, but even the flashlight itself is located in a dark spot, which can make it tricky to find.

Either way, I did finish the game and I really like its style. I just think improvements could definitely be made in terms of guiding the player better and improving visibility, or at least designing the environment in a way that naturally draws the player toward important objects.

I really liked the style atmosphere the game had, the claymation thing worked really well I'd say. I struggled a bit with finding some of the stuff because of how everything is laid out all back and forth but that's mostly just me. Had me saying "ATTENDAWNT!?" and searching for that guy whenever I couldn't figure out what to do. The story made sense at the start with an expository statement telling you why you're there but by the end I wasn't to sure what the dealio was if that makes sense.

Overall, it had the spooky. 10/10.

Good game but no stretching camera so f*ck you

The gameplay was a bit confusing, it was hard to understand where to go in some cases, and the flashlight, necessary for reaching the end of the game was also hidden in the dark on the ground, completely missable. The concept wasn't too bad

Ok so there's a lot of good here! First I love the kinda stop motion vibe of the animation, it's both creepy and nostalgic! The whole train was really cool with a good atmosphere too.

My main gripe is that the game is very very dark, so the items are almost impossible to see. I also ended up lost in the generator section and eventually gave up after 20 minutes of wandering. ^^' As for the items, it took about an hour wandering around without understanding where I was supposed to go, until I found the passenger maniffest: maybe having the attendant tell us "please, there's a free seat on row (whatever)" would prompt the players to go check there, and putting the manifest either on the seat or making it lit up a little more so it's easier to spot.

As for the key the attendant gave me, I assumed it was added directly to my inventory and didn't check the floor, maybe a sound cue would help? Like if I heard the key hit the floor, I would pick it up.

Also making the flashlight brighter when it is on the floor would help, as walked past it at first?

Overall a fun experience, I will try to get back to it later to try and finish it.

It has a lot of potential so I hope it helps!

That was a very cool game! The teleporting carts was done very smoothly, I could only tell I got teleported by the ticking sfx at the end of one of them. I think it got a little confusing with the directions, that or I just wasn't paying attention to the dialogue enough, I tend to do that. In the end, I really liked the layout of this game.


I ran into 2 small bugs:

• if you run over to the locked door while the conductor is still in his monologue before giving you the key. you can interrupt the sequence and cause the key not to spawn. 
• The menu screen after finishing the game still has your mouse cursor locked / invisible