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A jam submission

Astral ✦ CogsView game page

The mechanisms of the universe
Submitted by Lucas Tristão — 23 hours, 37 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Creativity#7454.0874.087
Artwork#14503.7833.783
Audio#15503.3483.348
Narrative#16172.9572.957
Enjoyment#21703.3483.348

Ranked from 23 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does your game fit the theme?
My game is about creating mechanical loops that result in moons looping around (orbiting) planets

(Optional) Please credit all assets you've used
Background music: https://freesound.org/people/X3nus/sounds/510994/
Button click: https://freesound.org/people/SmallConfusion/sounds/751088/
Cog Lock: https://freesound.org/people/Rudmer_Rotteveel/sounds/457454/
Mechanism sounds: https://freesound.org/people/apintofmild/sounds/641578/

(Optional) What would you like to be called if GMTK features your game?
Boug

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Comments

Submitted

I think the general gameplay and atmosphere was good. It only needs more mechanics to make more puzzles.

Submitted

Love the puzzles and mysterious vibes with the graphics and ambient music combo. Great work!

Submitted

An interesting and unique take on the theme!

Submitted

I really dig your game's chill atmosphere. The game is short, polished and expandable.
Keep at it!

Submitted

A polished puzzle—I like it

Submitted(+1)

Cool puzzle game, I haven't seen an idea like this anywhere around this jam so far. It wasn't longer than it needed to be, I think the length was just right (if anything, it could be longer, but i think you would need to add a whole new mechanic to keep it interesting, so you did good with what you had.)

Submitted(+1)

it remind me one of tomb raider underground puzzles

Submitted(+1)

Game is pretty neat, love the very enchanting vibe to it, though it does feel a little confusing at first, and resulted in me trial and erroring my way into the solution for the first puzzle and eventually learning, which felt a bit like bashing my head into a wall. That said, with a little rundown of the mechanics, this is a pretty dang good puzzler!

Developer

Thanks for the feedback! Could you be a little more specific about which parts of the puzzle you found confusing?

Submitted

Well, for example, when I placed one of the cogs on the axel at first, it didn't look like it aligned, and visually nothing changed, with the audio cue being my only real indicator that something had changed. Some preview showing you that the cog locked onto the axel you're hovering over and is a valid placement would be nice!

Developer

I see... That's very useful, thank you!

Submitted(+1)

Really cool puzzle game!! I love the 3D scene and astrology/navigation theme. (I would consider some smooth shading)

Developer(+1)

Thanks! I don't really have a lot of experience with 3D design so I lost a lot of time wrestling with render pipelines to get this WebGL build working. I'll probably try to polish the visuals a little more in a post jam version

Submitted

I totally get that. Props to you for exploring something new for this jam! Next time around, you'll be that much more ahead of the game! :)

Submitted(+1)

Nice. Maybe the moon could already be in place, but overall, the mechanic and setting are great.

Submitted(+1)

I think this is very cool. The aesthetic and the gameplay feel really nice. i think maybe being able to move the camera might be good, just to avoid clicking the wrong cog, - and I felt like there was some bugginess in the win conditions (twice I didn't get all of the moon pieces to circle their earth and still progressed? Not sure whether this was intentional.) As others have said this is definitely one to be expanded upon. As a jam entry it is great, as a full game with some ironing out of gameplay, and many more levels maybe getting onto larger systems and bigger playing areas with some (but not much) more clarity on what's expected of the player (mainly with the win condition I mentioned), then this could be a fantastic mobile/desktop release. Great job! 

Developer

Thanks for the feedback! I didn't get to playtest as much as I would have liked, so yeah that was probably a bug I missed. I'll see if I can fix it after the voting period ends.

Submitted(+2)

Nice small puzzle game. I think this concept can really be expanded upon, and I only wish they were more difficult

Submitted(+1)

I love this! A straightforward concept that can be built up in a ton of great ways! LOVE gear-based puzzles too!

Submitted(+1)

I liked it! A tutorial I think would have made a great addition, I couldn't figure out how to play the game for a while. The camera perspective made it a little hard to drop the cogs on, but its a super unique idea and enjoyed the puzzles!!