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A jam submission

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Find clues and help Topo get his gun back from the italian rat mafia
Submitted by Artemis, Atomic Potato, qzen, AverageJoe6, Maki, DarkRaisin7 — 55 minutes, 23 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Narrative#17632.8943.300
Audio#26093.0703.500
Artwork#28423.3333.800
Enjoyment#43142.8073.200
Creativity#57242.8073.200

Ranked from 10 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does your game fit the theme?
Out character is stuck in a loop of thought, until he figures out the perfect plan to execute.

(Optional) Please credit all assets you've used
all home made

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Submitted(+1)

A pretty simple game, I only got to one ending. The writing isn't bad, but it's not exactly that engaging either. I mean, I was just confused at what was going on either way, I don't know why these characters are here and why they do what they do etc. I found some of the dialogues funny though.

The arts are just ok. The music is pretty nice, set a really good atmosphere. As far as the gameply goes, it's pretty simple, but it sometimes it got a little confusing because of the perspective.

Developer(+1)

ty i did the music and ur the first person in the comments to comment about the music

Developer

ty ma man, all valid points

Submitted(+1)

A bit dark but the art was great

Developer

thanks again ma man :)
tho i wanna ask you, do you think having it a bit dark is a bad thing? do you think you would have liked the story more if it had a positive outcome, or it would have felt just as impactful?

Submitted(+1)

I think the dark comedy fits the vibe of the game well. I'm just not sure the goal and ending  is suitable for this jam where you need to consider the general audience, even if you don't show the stuff directly. That said, I gave it a high rating because I enjoyed it which is the only thing that matters when I rate stuff. I think changing the goal and ending to something other than taking their own life would have worked just fine for most people.

Developer

well thats quite a valid point, i should definitely practice writing more engaging stories that dont rely on a dark actions. Its kinda of a cheap trick to make a story more appealing, especially with a game like this that barely has any story structure, which it would have had some resemblance of structure if we had the time. 
Again, really appreciate it chief

Submitted(+1)

THIS is the moral choices we need in the games nowadays. Quick one, but i killed myself, so that's a huge win

Developer(+1)

lmao, thanks for playing chief o7
i believe you noticed there's 2 endings huh

Submitted(+1)

OHHHH NOOO, i didn't.

Should replay it then

Submitted(+1)

Pretty neat game, art felt really nice despite not having much to the animations. (Also did the guy off himself in the ending?)

Developer(+1)

tank :)
sadly he does in one of the endings

Submitted(+1)

Pretty cool art! I killed the rat doc without thinking much but things turned out well

Developer

sometimes violence is the answer! Thanks for playing chief, u a real one o7

Submitted(+3)

migu

Developer(+1)

some of the team members are passionate fans, ... i just know her from the pipe bomb meme

(+2)

The art style is so good!

Developer(+1)

Thank u! our artist was pretty goated :]

Submitted(+3)

Nice game, artwork especially. Bit grim though.

Developer(+2)

heh, glad u liked it :]
Sorry about the story, i was a bit of a maniac when i was writing it. The artist wanted to change my mind about the endings if we had time

Submitted(+3)

So first of all, props to you for using godot engine. Opensource is goated. Secondly your artstyle is goated and game is actually kinda fun! But i'd like if there was like a label that showed what quests you have rn. Anyway i played it a bit and like i really enjoyed it, pretty fun. Good job guys!

Submitted(+3)

you know after i played it a bit, it gets pretty confusing. I guess u gotta reply the time line a few times to understand

Developer(+3)

glad u liked the game my man :D
Sorry if it was confusing, but that was sort of my intention with restarting the timeline to incorporate the loop theme. You are making mistakes as a detective, and this is all in your mind, so you are restarting your thought process and doing things right or to better understand the situation. I wanted to make it more clear if we had the time, but we've done the majority of the work in the last couple of days.
Thanks again for playing, u a real one chief o7

Submitted(+2)

Fun game!

Developer (1 edit) (+1)

glad u enjoyed it, means so much :)