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[devlog] Cloud Mage

A topic by Queenie created Jan 02, 2016 Views: 3,872 Replies: 68
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TAKKA TAKKA INTENSIFIES

Anyway, another good ol' writing day. Finished the script/code for day two and got started on day three. I could try to finish it before I go to bed tonight, but I've been having an awful headache today ever since I got back from work so it might be best to call it a night @_@ I really, really want to get all the writing done, though.

I'm getting the hang of menus and if/else statements. It's enough for the stuff I have planned, but in the future it might be fun to experiment with more complicated stuff like some of that tricky python coding (i think the encyclopaedia uses a lot of python code, but I just copied and pasted it so I don't think that really counts for me learning it :P)

I think yesterday or the day before, I tried experimenting with trying something new for the final art style of what everything would look like. I started with the cloud mage since she's the main character, so why not let her set the tone?

(I gave up on the 2nd one halfway through lol) Confession: I don't really like either of them, though the first one is a little closer to what I want to go for. I think I'll try and fall back on a style I'm more familiar with, something like this or this/this. (linked art is all by me)

Hey, another encyclopaedia entry!

And I'll leave this here:

;^)

AAA I LOVE THAT ART SO MUCH especially the first one, the textured feel it has is sooo nice. and the colors omg. her design really perfectly screams 'cloud mage' aesthetic. im so so excited to see you put this all together toward the end *v*

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Thanks! I'm fond of the textured look, and I think it works well on the cloud mage, especially, because of the knit patterns :> Thank you!! I'm still hoping I can have a nice, finished game by the end of this ;v;

aa that first sprite looks so cool! and magic rainwater is my favourite item so far (so cool)

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Thank you! Magic rainwater thinks you're cool too ;0

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ohh gosh your art is soooo so beautiful and even if you don't go with either of them i really like the textures of the first sprite!! this thread is always such a treat to check :3c

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Awww you'll make me blush u///u <3

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Oh my god this looks so cute. I love your art style, I'm really looking forward to seeing finished shots!

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*TAKKA TAKKA INTENSIFIES AND VIBRATES INTO ORBIT*

I finished writing to the end of day 4 of my game! There's a day 5 planned, but I'm going to leave that on the backburner for now, I may not even finish day 5 in time for the jam tbh. I feel a bit of coding/writing burnout at this point... so! I'm going to work on art assets now!

I dropped my script.rpy file into a wordcount tool to see how many words I'd written, and....


WOW, I had not realized I'd written so dang much.... Almost 1k of those words were part of the encyclopaedia code I copied and pasted, but the rest is pretty much all writing/coding by me. This is officially longer than the fanfiction oneshots I used to write, lol.

So far I've learned a lot about coding in renpy. Most useful of all are probably the True/False/None and if/else statements. I've gotten a pretty good handle on them as well as menu wrangling.


This might look confusing, but basically I've worked out a system to have the player choose an ingredient, get a snippet of the characters talking, and then be taken to a screen where you're asked if you're sure you want to choose that ingredient. You can say no, go back to the first menu, choose another ingredient, see the convo attached to the new ingredient, and then be asked again to confirm. If you change your mind again and go back to the first ingredient, you don't have to sit through the convo again.

I haven't actually implemented this yet, this is just a quick test I did to see if my system of true/false statements and menus would work, and it did! So I'll implement that at a later time.

I get a little nervous bc, being a text-based game, people's enjoyment of it will depend on whether or not they like my writing since that's what the game basically is... BUUUUUT it'll probably be okay... *noncommittal hand gestures*

And, as per tradition, here's another encyclopaedia entry to end the post ;3


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Dumping some drawings I did today!


Redid the gryphon rider. I've learned my lesson: DON'T MIX COWBOY ACCESSORIES WITH JUMPSUITS.........


convo with a friend:

me: i'm going to draw a catboy for my game. what if he wore a really tiny shirt
friend: do it
me: okay, but, what if it's like, really tiny, like underboob tiny
friend: do it
friend: wait what if he wears alice's shirt, from VLR


me: WE TOOK IT TOO FAR

Catboy is pretty ridiculous, please forgive me (also i forgot his tail but I'll remember it for the roughs/final pic)

There's three more characters and some other misc stuff to conceptualize, I'll post them later when I finish them \o/

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Plant tamer concepts. He carries a sentient (?maybe) plant friend in his work apron so it can go places with him.

Is... Is the plant friend saying "Work hard for the money"? I hope it is. This is fantastic.

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pfffft it's meant to be the plant tamer saying that, but your idea is better!

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I can't get over how great your art style and character design are

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Awwww you'll make me blush u///u

Thank you! I'll be working hard on getting these dang art assets finished!

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omg i love these characters??? your style is so charming aa

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Thank you!!

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your designs, yeesssss.... i love them @___@ also holy crap, congrats on that word count!! man, i gotta get to work and catch up!!

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Thank you! We've still got a week left, we can do it (و•̀•́)و

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im rly liking your artwork and designs for everything!! the gryphon gunner is great, im crushing on her already :') your writings rly charming and fun to read also, and from what i can see of the setting through the item descriptions it sounds super cool and imaginative. i dont even usually play games like this but this looks rly enjoyable!

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Thanks! Most of the game is just reading so I'm glad the item descriptions sound good, at least :P VNs are my guilty pleasure...

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Ah, I can't believe it took me so long to check out your devlog. You're game looks seriously SOOOO cute! I love your art and I love the concept. This is totally the kind of game that I love. I can't wait to see how this turns out!

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Hey, welcome to my thread ;D Thank you so much for the kind words!

Also, hi on twitter ;)

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HI!! It's been a couple of days. I have some stuff to show, I guess.


Drew this concept for the merserker warrior (yes i shamelessly mashed the mer- prefix with berserker). I didn't really like it though, so I ditched the robes/cloak and beige colours bc it didn't feel right.



She's pretty buff. I'm much happier with these! I think they could still use work but tbh, time's a ticking. Idk how much of the art I'll be able to finish, but let's give it a shot. Hope the last few jam days are treating everyone well!

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Aaaaah, I love the merserker!!! Both in concept and execution.

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This is what it looks like when I forget to resize my character portraits, like the fool that I am.


SHE BIG


Much better.

One down, a lot more to go @___@

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your sprites are gorgeous!!

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this looks fantastic!

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this is SO COOL!!! i love the diff kinds of plants!! the pussywillows are esp so cute!!!! the chunky sweater is also SO GOOD!!!

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HI!!! Thank you for the comments, I appreciate all the kind words ;w; I'm in a bit of a rush rn but I just wanted to show the roughs I've drawn up for all the character portraits.


Will probably touch up on some stuff. Let's see how much I can finish tonight..... !!

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I want to smooch all of these darlings ((or at least befriend them))

The merserker and catboy are my favorites they are!! So cute!!! And I want to know more about them

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The roughs look great!

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your art and these designs are sooo charming! (the merserker is... gosh... wow...)

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I did it!! It's not quite as finished as I planned, but it's here, and it's playable \o/

Post-Jam checklist:

Art to finish
- Gryphon Gunner
- Cat Thief
- Merserker
- Plant Tamer
- Plants
- Catalysts
- Sweets

Background Art to finish
- brush up start screen
- home bg
- night bg
- spell stages
- cottage bg

Writing/Coding to finish
- code clean-up
- script revisions
- 5th day/secret bonus ending

See everyone around, the jam was a real blast \o/

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