I do like the idea, ive been thinking of making a textbased game myself for a while. I do think some more clarity would be nice explaining what the colors and such mean. I was also just roaming around a bit but the world got me curious! To answer if its good or trash really depends on where you take it. Text based games are only good if you can make the player imagine the world they are in, it did feel a bit dystopian (wich was what you were going for reading trough your comments) so thats good. I'd say keep it up!

For bugs, I got stuck when I fel asleep on the floor and the go back didnt function anymore. Maybe show the last choice aswell since I prayed 6 times and nothing happend so I was curious if it was bugged or not finished but then I also had to go back trough 6 times of prayers (god loves me now).

Im curious to what this will become.

I'm not sure if the ending is when you "die" after reaching the action limit. If so, it's good; if not, how can I get it?

As I said in the comment on the page, I see potential in the story, although it's somewhat confusing right now. Perhaps you could progress day by day or end by end. The point is not to work on the entire project as a single project, but rather break it down into chunks that you can complete without overexerting yourself.

I hope to continue seeing how the project progresses, even if it's slow.

Enjoy your first look! 📖🤖