I love the sleep on floor option for when I died :)
Seems like you can go pretty wide with this, at this point its hard to tell with you idea. It really is going to depend on your vision and the story telling, I like the colour text for your options that is effective.
Some of the text structure need to be more carefully placed as your game lives and dies on text and artistically you just have the layout visually to add to it or take away. I.e. breaking words over lines
The main thing I note that really needs fixing is the day "0" bit, this is due to the fact it starts on that line and comes across a bit clumsy. As you are cycling through the week just use the 0-6 as variables and use if day = 0 then dayName = "Monday". I don't know which engine you are using but I am sure we can help you find a solution.