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A jam submission

Visitor from the Scribble WorldView game page

Help the scribble world visitor to go back home!
Submitted by ollipa, adarshk7 — 9 hours, 1 minute before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Overall#34.0004.000
Creativity#64.0004.000
Challenge#64.2004.200
Gameplay#83.6003.600
Theme#184.2004.200

Ranked from 15 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted

The game is so cute! I really love the concept :D The visitor reminds me kodamas from Princess Mononoke, haha

Developer

Thanks! I didn’t think about it, but you are right, there is some similarity Kodamas!

Submitted

Good game, intresting idea

Developer

Thank you!

Submitted

I love the idea of a doodle visitor from a doodle world. I was happy to help the little alien fix its ship :) I really enjoyed the puzzle at the end, too! Great job!

Developer

Thank you! I’m glad that you enjoyed the game :)

Submitted

I like the little alien's voice clips! and the puzzle at the end adds an unexpected turn of gameplay. I agree with the comments that movement is a little heavy, I would consider it maybe a little too icy or low-friction for what would be expected for the environment. In addition, some of the assets fit the scribble/doodle theme more than others; the ones that do fit are really good though!

Developer(+1)

Thank you for taking time to write a detailed review! We really appreciate it :) We wanted to have all textures hand drawn but ran out of time. Maybe we will create an updated version after the jam ends.

Submitted

I really liked it, especially the puzzle part! The graphics of the world could have been improved though (like the environment does not fit to the other objects like houses or players etc because of the border)

Developer(+1)

Thank you! We had a plan to update all of the textures but ran out of time. Everything else is hand drawn expect the terrain, bushes and trees. Maybe we will update them after the jam ends :)

Submitted

I liked the animation and the sound effects, but the controls could use a bit of work because the character feels a bit heavy to use.

Developer

You are right, we need to work on the movement so it would feel more natural. Thanks for playing!

Submitted

Very cute game, and the puzzles are well made. It was a bit frustrating trying to fight the aliens though, I think the hitboxes could be larger.

Developer(+1)

Thanks for the feedback! You are not the only one who made the same comment about hitboxes. I think they need some more tweaking.

Submitted

I really enjoyed the final puzzle

Developer

Thank you! Adarshk7 was the mastermind behind the puzzles :)

Submitted

very charming game! little bit short, but very well made

Developer

Thank you! We would have loved to make it longer if we had more time ;)

nice and fun game, i love it!!

Developer

I’m glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for playing :)

Submitted

This graphics is great, the theme is well used, but the character control is a bit weird (too much inertia) and I couldn't get past the first key and barrel puzzle :(. But it is clear that the work has been done well! Good job

Developer

Thanks for the feedback! If you want to try again, watch for the hint that the alien gives you before entering the spaceship :) 

Submitted

Well Done really enjoyed it :)

Developer

Thanks for playing :)

Submitted

I really enjoyed playing this game! Congrats on a job well done. The premise reminded me of the beginning of Earthbound, but where the aliens are our friends instead of enemies. :) The music was really good. I felt so energized during the final stage. Nice work.

Developer

Thank you for the kind words!