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A jam submission

Crimson SaviorView game page

Submitted by Kirito, Shynah, Rosa, GodTGamer (@GameDesignV), Elllowyn — 2 hours, 24 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Audio#123.8003.800
Fun#273.5003.500
Overall#313.6003.600
Gameplay/Design#333.6003.600
Graphics#463.5003.500

Ranked from 10 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

What would you like feedback on?
Overall composition, almost nothing was done in the GMTK jam. Story, music, gameplay.

What did you update?
Gameplay, the enemies hunt you around.
NPCs, all planned dialogs are in.
More music. A lot of bug fixes.

Name of updated upload (if downloadable)
Web-Build is updated, downloads are the old jam commision.

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Comments

Submitted(+2)

Enjoyed it. I really like the theming. 

The patrolling hunters are way to easy. Also there is no use of your butterfly ability. I know it makes you faster but then you just spam it when you can. About the second one, it doesn't work. Only shows one person, the one in the garden.

But putting aside all of these, it's a well written experience.

Developer

Thank you! We really appreciate the feedback. We planned on doing more abilities, but it was just too much. :D

Submitted(+2)

Interesting concept and good story

Submitted(+2)

Really fun game and good story

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Charming story idea, though I wish it wasn't so obvious what the "correct" dialogue choices are (they shouldn't always be the top ones). Background graphics are very good, though the character sprites are just okay and don't blend in super well. Music is nice, though there could've been more sound effects. Pretty good overall.

Submitted(+1)

Hi!

I just streamed this game ( https://www.twitch.tv/videos/1889937622 )!

It was a good game. I missed some text at the beginning I couldn’t read aloud because of the timing. I think I missed also some hint that I have to talk with all the NPCs to unlock the good ending.

However is a good game. Congratulations. Keep working!

Submitted

Just got the good ending! I love the idea of a benevolent vampire! I especially liked the audio!
Some suggestions:
1. Changing the font would be an easy way to make the game feel a lot more professional.
2. It'd be interesting if it was harder to choose the correct dialogue options--maybe there could be more than 2, the correct one could not always be the top one, and you could use information gathered from other people to inform your choices.
3. Maybe there could be some sort of mini-game to complete in order to save someone (I'm thinking of something that is typically used for fishing where you try to click while a line that is moving from side to side is within a bar).
Overall, great work! I see a lot of room for expansion here!

Submitted(+1)

Just got the good ending! I love the idea of a benevolent vampire! I especially liked the audio!
Some suggestions:
1. Changing the font would be an easy way to make the game feel a lot more professional.
2. It'd be interesting if it was harder to choose the correct dialogue options--maybe there could be more than 2, the correct one could not always be the top one, and you could use information gathered from other people to inform your choices.
3. Maybe there could be some sort of mini-game to complete in order to save someone (I'm thinking of something that is typically used for fishing where you try to click while a line that is moving from side to side is within a bar).
Overall, great work! I see a lot of room for expansion here!

Developer(+1)

Thanks a lot! These are really good ideas, which would make the game more detailed ^^

Submitted

Love the concept and the mood and an awesome idea. You can see you put a lot in. The whole vampire storyline is really something that could work. It needs some more mechanics to work as a full blown game in the end but you are on the right track. The sounds were so fitting. The level and graphics worked ok but needs to be more in line with the world you are creating to take the mood to  a new level. Promising

Submitted

Love the concept and the mood. You can see you put a lot in. The whole vampire storyline is really something that could work. It needs some more mechanics to work as a full blown game in the end but you are on the right track. The sounds were so fitting. The level and graphics worked ok but needs to be more in line with the world you are creating to take the mood to  a new level. Promising

Submitted(+1)

Love the concept and the mood. You can see you put a lot in. The whole vampire storyline is really something that could work. It needs some more mechanics to work as a full blown game in the end but you are on the right track. The sounds were so fitting. The level and graphics worked ok but needs to be more in line with the world you are creating to take the mood to  a new level. Promising

Developer(+1)

Thank you for the feeback!

Submitted(+1)

I like the idea for the game and the art style well done! :) It's a great start keep working on it!

Developer(+2)

Thank you!