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Realms of Regalia: Royal Rumble's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Unique Selling Point | #7 | 3.643 | 3.643 |
| Clarity | #15 | 3.214 | 3.214 |
| Engagement | #22 | 2.571 | 2.571 |
| Overall Pitch Quality | #26 | 2.643 | 2.643 |
Ranked from 14 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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- I'm missing some backstory and context probably but does this share an in-game universe or something The Realm Games pitch? Just a thought hahaha While I would have appreciated more info and visual explanation- I think it has enough of a hook to actually captivate players! I can't say much else at this point, except good luck~
- Nice.
- Split your text up so it's a bit easier to read and use a video to showcase gameplay!
- Great for this stage of development The press kit needs more of your great artwork Same with the itchio page Tweet needs more structure and less words Need a more clear idea of what this game is
PitchYaPitch Tweet
https://twitter.com/InsertDragon/status/1452598679169163267?s=20
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1eftGml1IzQDHUD9Uyjd1B1yUtYo-llbYvymoUjeQtog/edit?usp=sharing
Itch.io Game URL (DevLog Update)
https://jameow.itch.io/realms-of-regalia-royal-rumble
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The tweet gives me a solid idea of what the game will be (think its missing the word "tag" in the last sentence?). Press kit was informative. I'm left with several questions about the game itself but am intrigued enough to know more. Visuals would go a long way to show potential players if they would enjoy the game.
Thank you for sharing!
Would like to see more 'game features' in the press kit
Sounds like an interesting concept, there's just nothing to go on other than the logo at the moment (which I'm guessing is because it's still early in development?) So a good start and looking forward to seeing more when it's ready :)
Really like the art and game pitch from your press kit (specifically the "epic game of tag" description)! I think if you included that in your tweet instead of the current tweet text and logo, it would be more descriptive and intriguing.
Also, the tweet link from the itch page for your game is broken. Just so you know :)
+ In my mind, I'm picturing Mean Girls type of cat fights so...
+ Appealing concept
- Not much to go on
- Pitch could have been stronger
The pitch tweet could use art of the game itself instead of the logo. I think you have a video right? That would work best!
I think there sould be something to move people, kickstarter or steam or any page you like to move the people.. And maybe little more about your game in your itch page
I think there sould be something to move people, kickstarter or steam or any page you like to move the people.. And maybe little more about your game in your itch page
Hi @InsertDragon --
Love the level design! The art style is fun and cute.
Remember to include your Steam page so people can start wishlisting. (I only know it's there because of the sneak preview.)
That's probably the most critical piece of your marketing right now and your key Call to Action.
Your press kit should use full page images rather than the mini snapshots. The idea is to excite.
When you can: a game trailer and some gameplay trailers will really help to get people excited.
Suggested edit to your Tweet [although the text may not fit with the tags and the link] >
Realms of Regalia: Royal Rumble is an epic game of tag between magical princesses!
A cute, fast-paced online multiplayer arena for 2-8 players perfect for the whole family.
Wishlist on Steam today!
[Insert Steam Link]
[Insert Hashtags]
Maybe skip the previous name for clarity