love it! the buildup from 1:40 to the chorus sounded amazing

Very nice and emotional track, good work!

Heavily vibing on this Akira Yamaoka feel. I listened to this several times in a row. You really captured that sense of emotion, sadness and progression so well. My favorite parts were during the climax when it went a step further at 1:56 and when you brought the drums back in at 2:48, those two moments wrapped up the sensation that I'm in a cycle, those moments where you you get caught in distant memories, only to repeat. Love it.

Good composition and fitting atmosphere, I think it'd fit sort of "credits" song. I'd gladly hear more of it, there are some cool melodies here that I think could expand into their own tracks.

that build-up into the more lyrical section is really awesome :o

I like how you use repetition to evoke the cycles of memories, while at the same time not causing the music to feel stagnant. I also like how you use the slightly out of tune piano to help convey the sense of time, moving from something that sounds old to a clear guitar and bass line that feel newer. Your drum groove is also very smooth and is very effective at setting the psychologically unsettling vibe for what sounds like an awesome idea for a game. Thanks for sharing!

Really cool atmosphere and feel! The drums, guitars, and piano add to the sense of mystery around the story you made with the child and elderly person

I like the powerful build-up leading to 1:57. Also I can easily imagine this being the opening track to  game like Another Code or Hotel Dusk. Good Work !