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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Theme | #5 | 3.800 | 3.800 |
| Story | #5 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
| Enjoyment | #10 | 3.300 | 3.300 |
| Audio | #10 | 2.800 | 2.800 |
| Overall | #11 | 3.067 | 3.067 |
| Concept | #13 | 3.100 | 3.100 |
| Graphics | #14 | 1.900 | 1.900 |
Ranked from 10 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Did you use any optional theme? If so which one?
Didn't use an optional theme
What game engine did you use?
Twine
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Sorry it's incomplete! :(
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I really enjoyed the writting it felt like one of those books I like a lot and I do wish there was more cause it is interesting! I like a lot of how this game feels and I like overall the choices you took about the gameplay design. NICE!
Very nice writting. Captivating. I like this text only game that remind me of DOS-console games back in old times.
I really hope I could see more of this. It was really interesting and already I was making all kind of stories of what was happening to the main character.
It just needs more time and content!
Nice!
Love the text based medium you used. The writing was awesome, I enjoyed it. I think you did really well with providing choices. Wish that the story went on longer though!
This is a compelling story and I wish I could see more of it. Some excellent writing here. A little thing I enjoyed was counting the seconds between lightning and thunder--how nostalgic!
Having to go back through some of the stuff in the cabin was an interesting choice, and not necessarily a bad one, but I did get the feeling I was stuck for a fleeting moment. Maybe a very small, very subtle clue would help.
Overall, I really liked this game. Great work!
This game is rad! I did get stuck part way through, but I'm guessing that is just because the story isn't finished yet.
I don't know if this was intentional, but I liked the fact I kind of had to revisit passages a few times before I could actually get out of the cabin. It gave the game a real disorienting feeling, and added to the labyrinthine vibe of the whole thing.
Please keep at it. This had a similar voice to the slightly-sarcastic point-and-click games of the old days! Looking forward to more.
Thank you so much for playing, yeah I didn't finish all the different rooms properly!
good job on this! even though it wasn't complete, i still thought that the writing was nice