Very well written. I included it in a compilation video series of all of the Mystic Western Game Jam games, if you'd like to take a look :)

Very introspective!

Too abstract for my english :) but comments below are impressive!

I updated my game, now it works - Luminous Cactus.

Beautiful writing, and very good pacing of the experience, well done ! I had to play it several times

EXCELLENT poem/game. Very dead horse.

Superb writing here, really very impressed by it. Perfect size and scope. Sits just right (uneasily).

This experience conjured a lot of interesting ideas despite its bite sized nature. I wish that my game had writing like this.