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The loop of life's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Narrative | #2183 | 2.750 | 2.750 |
| Creativity | #4127 | 3.222 | 3.222 |
| Audio | #4347 | 2.667 | 2.667 |
| Enjoyment | #4856 | 2.667 | 2.667 |
| Artwork | #6471 | 2.361 | 2.361 |
Ranked from 36 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
It's about the loop of life, the human evolution
(Optional) Please credit all assets you've used
opengameart.org, pinterest for ideas
(Optional) What would you like to be called if GMTK features your game?
Steoba
Comments
I really liked the game’s concept and storytelling style. Nice work! Don’t forget to check out mine too :)
Great work on this game. I love the foundations youve got here. i did find drawing the sword difficult with my mouse though
The goat is strong!! Enjoyed the game, the idea is really cool, keep it up!
love this idea, it reminds of some old flash game I loved to play! too bad its only available on windows :/
Great concept! I think the music fits perfectly. I feel you did a really good and unique job interpreting the Game Jam theme 'Loop' within the limited time.
Just a minor suggestion: I know you already did your best to optimize the gameplay experience under the constraints, but I feel the difficulty could be lowered a bit further. I think this would help players experience the content you want to convey more smoothly, without getting stuck at a certain point (of course, my game also needs improvement in this area – it's a valuable lesson I learned from this Game Jam).
But this doesn't diminish your game's excellent expression of the Game Jam theme. It's truly a fantastic concept and has the potential to be even cooler. Good job!d(゚∀゚d)
I like the texturing over the art, reminds me of the realistico Minecraft resource pack. Some of the minigames take a while to get through, and there are a lot of controls that aren’t conveyed properly at times. Regardless, nice job putting this together!
Good job on your game. I found some of the minigames a bit difficult for me! The art style has a nice textured look to it but you could probably clean up a few of the white edges on sprites. Well done.
Really nice game. I like that you've used so many interactive ways to tell the story, and the music fits perfectly.Great work!
I think the idea of is cool, just creating scenes of a caveman like creating fire, fight, etc
I wonder if streamlining the controls could help - there were so many keys and mouse involved, which on one hand might be intended to express the various things you're doing, but in practice - maybe the effort should have gone elsewhere, like improving the responsivness of the controls in the fight against the killer goat.
Also the art was sort of a pixel art, but with each "pixel" having different size and gradient color, which is a little jarring. Overall it didn't look bad, but little things like not having white line above the head, can help
The gameplay here is great! I loved it! But one thing I would suggest is to make the art consistent. You've got mixels. Some of the pixels are bigger than others. That really degrades from the art quality. But it was fun regardless! Nice game!
Also I'd appreciate feedback on my submission if you get a chance!





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