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A jam submission

Sally's Dream Forest (Jam Version)View game page

Platformer about escaping a dream forest.
Submitted by Kobato Games — 1 minute, 16 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Graphics#443.3503.350
Audio#483.0003.000
Overall#882.9102.910
Theme#963.0503.050
Fun and Game Design#1132.6002.600
Originality & Innovation#1502.5502.550

Ranked from 20 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

beautiful game ! 


(if u got multiple notifications of me saying same thing....my browser glitched)

Developer(+1)

Thank you!

(It did say I had three new replies. Thanks for letting me know why.)

Submitted(+1)

Very nice game!

Submitted(+1)

Smooth controls, I hope you finish this game. GL!

Submitted(+1)

this will be  a great game.

Submitted(+1)

Good contrat between the player and the background. GG

Submitted(+1)

Really short, and there's too many art styles in the game that don't really go well with each other. The idea is really good, and I hope u come to finish it sometime. Keep up the nice work.

(+1)

Excellent looks very good, with more time it will improve.

(+1)

It looks interesting, I hope you finish it one day

Submitted(+1)

Can't wait to see how this comes together after the jam! Cute character and the controls feel nice. 

Submitted(+1)

Very nice! Good job!

(+1)

GOOD JOB

Submitted(+1)

Wow, the controls feel really nice. Artstyle is really cool too. Although, playing a story-driven game might be not handy during quick-pased things like jams. Still, loved that Alice in Wonderland feeling.

Developer

Thanks. This software is not really made for easy dialogue and I had to set up a system of invisible blocks for Sally to collide into to trigger it to appear. Then at first I could only get it to advance by clicking ON each text object. I eventually found I could set it to show/delete the text objects with mouse clicks anywhere on the screen, but the text would only show in the right order if I set up the show/delete text objects events backwards. I'm sure there's a much more efficient way with string variables or something and I know Yarn can be integrated, I just did not have time to learn it for the jam.

Submitted(+1)

Sadly it's so short at this moment, i got into this story. Looking forward for updates!

Developer

Thanks. I am working them and would like to have the full version up by the time the jam is over.

Submitted(+1)

Seems really interesting, good job.

Submitted(+1)

looks cool, am interested to see how the full version looks, btw, try applying the grain filter to the players as well, i hink it might look better

Developer(+1)

Thanks. I thought about that, but I wanted them to pop out from the background, especially Sally, who does not come from the grayscale dream world. However, I did put a slight sepia filter to her because the default image popped out too much and for the bird I added a much stronger sepia tint. The oracle, I definitely wanted to stand out, but maybe I should add a slight tint to it too.

Submitted(+1)

I'm stuck on "What are you? A bird or a bee?" but looks cool, I like the dark style

Developer(+1)

Did you try left clicking to advance the text? I got that it into the game description, but forgot to put it in the in-game instructions.

Submitted

The game looks pretty good but the Theme isn't really in there. And this is more of a personal taste but im not into creepy music. Good job though.

Developer

The theme was pets/companions, so I felt that an animal companion that accompanied the player through the forest would fit the theme.

I get what you mean about creepy music. I'm not found of scary games/music myself, which is why I made sure to note in one of the descriptions that the game was not intended to be horror, just spooky atmospheric, and I tried to aim for mysterious music as opposed to scary. I think the title is actually "Melodic and Gentle Ambiance," though coupled with the forest and old film effect, it definitely is a bit creepy  :-O

Submitted(+1)

Oh sorry. to me it just sounded a bit creepy.

Submitted(+1)

And i said that since the pet didn't do much but now i changed my mind sorry.

Developer

That's fine. I do agree the music did come out slightly creepy and the inclusion of my pet/companion is not outright stated like some other submissions made sure to do. Maybe I will have the bird-bee described as her companion in the final version. Thank you for your feedback. 

Submitted(+1)

No problem. And thanks for not taking it too badly

Submitted

The game looks pretty good but the Theme isn't really in there. And this is more of a personal taste but im not into creepy music. Good job though.

Developer (1 edit)

Forgot to add the liluo link. Here it is: https://liluo.io/games/19a39a56-d1c3-454b-915e-a5e08a74c7b9

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