great design, love the art - would be cool to see more dynamic enemies
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Pablo_Chip's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Visuals | #452 | 3.679 | 4.000 |
| Audio | #1051 | 2.592 | 2.818 |
| Innovation | #1161 | 2.509 | 2.727 |
| Overall | #1161 | 2.578 | 2.803 |
| Gameplay | #1265 | 2.341 | 2.545 |
| Enjoyment | #1289 | 2.425 | 2.636 |
| Theme | #1672 | 1.923 | 2.091 |
Ranked from 11 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does the game fit the theme?
You are a drawing on a kid´s table in school. There´s nothing that can go wrong, you might think.
What code and assets did you not make from scratch during the jam (if any)?
made everything myself, only downloaded fonts (I am allowed to use them for the project, looked that up)
How many people worked on the game?1
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I loved the concept of the game! I’m always doodling on my notes, so when I realized they came to life, I was so excited! I’m looking forward to the continuation. For the next levels, it might be fun to explore other notes or desks - just a thought! I really enjoyed playing. Keep up the great work!
The game is really cute and the art styles are unique! My critique are the game are quite repetitive, with the game being quite long and you just go in a circle. Great work.
I think the concept and gameplay are great! I liked how the music would reflect when I took damage, very don't starve kinda vibe there, my only critique would be to have different ways of defeating enemies, like if it's drawn with a pen then lead it into a water spill, or have a lil roll or action to juke out the drawings. That aside well done!
The art style is great! I think the concept of killing the enemies with the eraser is a nice mechanic and you could also add new types of movement for each new character (example: the circle could behave as a ball). Other than that, well done!
The art is wonderful, and the name Pablo fits the character perfectly !!
The gameplay felt a bit simple, but the mechanic for erasing monsters was a great idea! One thing I noticed is that moving diagonally makes you walk faster. Try normalizing your direction vectors to keep movement consistent :)
You should try to set the submission setting to be able to put it in fullscreen (within the frame options in the edit game menu), maybe that way we'll be able to play! Hope you're able to fix it!
Screen resolution not set correctly so unplayable. Think you have time to upload a fix. Check the screen size on the Itch.io submission page is set correctly and the WebGL is set up for the same resolution. Hope you can fix so I can rate. Thanks.
sadly this one wasnt working for my computer the game was locked into the top left corner
let me know if you fix the game and id love to try it :)
https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-13/rate/3338871 (this is my submission as my jam page isnt linking properly)
This is really great! I love the hand-drawn style and also the soundtrack, the game is very low-tempo/low-intensity and I really like this about it. Question: are those your school notes?
I'm glad you enjoyed it and happy to hear that it wotks on your computer since it has problems working on others.
Oh yes it is supposed to be not so stressful 'cause oh my gosh I thing playing games shouldn't give heart attacks :D
Good to hear that you love the sound since I'm still gaining lots of experience in making sound.
Not my school notes but I created them especially for the jam. With easy context so everyone can read and learn a bit while playing along! If you find any mistakes in it you can tell me, I'll change that after the jam.


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