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Wolfstar Sins and Paradise

Sin doesn't end in the afterlife. Can these two heroes save their immortal souls? · By Wolfstar

How do you like the game?

A topic by Wolfstar created Apr 18, 2017 Views: 2,555 Replies: 51
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Developer

Feedback is greatly appreciated, thank you for your time =3

Alright, so I played the game, and despite your art style not exactly being my cup of tea (I'm not really for hyper-bara, but you actually did pretty good on this and the art rubbed off on me. The only one that was a bit much for me was Janus) it was actually pretty good. The story actually got me hooked, and I can't wait for updates~ oh! and the few CGs seem a bit off from the character sprites, and I really like the charecter sprites!

Developer

Thanks for playing the game, we'll likely see the art end evolve over time (I practice everyday). Hyper-bara is not always my mission, when I draw I tend to draw large (blames his high school teacher), at this time none of the assets, sprites/bg/sfx, are safe from being replaced as the development process continues. I'm very happy to hear that the story end is what you like the most. Thanks again dragonboy888! =3

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I'm being a little harsh, it is really good still! I really liked Alex, his design was my favorite of all! Also, it's not completely hyper-bara per say, just some of the characters have pretty exaggerated muscles. But all in all. I do love your writing <3

Developer

Thank you so much!  There will be a great deal of art evolution to come  =3

fox wants update

Developer

You're in luck.  The next update is coming soon, likely at the end of the week.  I'm having a second update this month because the first update was a short one, (lots of new art assets, but very little story).  Thanks for playing, and make sure to check back often for new content  =3

i am, breh.

stay fluffy

Developer

New Stuff is here again  =3

I'm definitely enjoying the game so far, looking forward to the next update!

Developer

Thank you so much ZalHaar, I can't wait to see what happens next!   =3

im not gonna lie i really enjoyed the writing and character/world building but it feels as if the story doesn't know what it wants to be.A action adventure a romance or a thriller.But i enjoyed alot of it you clearly know your characters and for that i applaud almost nobody can write characters that feel human.is it just you working on the game or a team? Because its rather good eather way! 

Developer

Thank you kindly cmim2507.  I'm glad that you enjoy the characters, and the evolving story.  I'm really happy with the latest work,  about 90% of all the work is my doing.  I have reliable bug testers now, as well as my friends who know what to do when coding errors arise to help me along the way.  Please check back often for more updates  =3

I was playing throw the janus thread when a problem occurred when Jenny tried to read her mails.

Followingthe crash report.


I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/Jenny1.rpy", line 175, in script
Exception: String u'[We must have really impressed him, who knew data collection could take us so far? You have me to thank for keeping us organized and running efficiently.-' ends with an open format operation.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/Jenny1.rpy", line 175, in script
  File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 613, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, interact=self.interact)
  File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 1142, in say
    who(what, interact=interact)
  File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\character.py", line 867, in __call__
    what = what_pattern.replace("[what]", sub(what, translate=translate))
  File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\character.py", line 849, in sub
    return renpy.substitutions.substitute(s, scope=scope, force=force, translate=translate)[0]
  File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\substitutions.py", line 232, in substitute
    s = formatter.vformat(s, (), kwargs)
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 563, in vformat
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 572, in _vformat
  File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\substitutions.py", line 157, in parse
    raise Exception("String {0!r} ends with an open format operation.".format(s))
Exception: String u'[We must have really impressed him, who knew data collection could take us so far? You have me to thank for keeping us organized and running efficiently.-' ends with an open format operation.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.12.2.2029
wolfstar_sins_and_paradise 1.0

Developer

Howlies Alessan.  Thank you for the bug report, I greatly appreciate it.   For this error we had a stray bracket marker that is causing the error.  I'm trying my best to remove brackets from my writing style, because they cause errors in renpy, looks like I missed another one.  Rest assured that this will be removed in time for the next itchio build.   An update is coming soon.  Thanks again!   =3

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Game not bad after all, I dislike this kind of art but it grew in me a little(Pretty much a lot). Some part of there were funny, story is great, music is good, character is hot, romance me like very much, what I rate this? 4/5

Music: 3/5

Story: 4/5

romance: 4/5

Character: NA (To hot for this)

I only tried the demo not the game yet. I was hoping for Hugo at the demo as well(LOL), but it still great so far. Keep up the good work! Good Luck and Have Fun(At work huehuehue).

One last thing, there more story then the demo right? Like full version, but still updating.

Developer

Thank you kindly IPlayAllDay.  I'm happy with the scores thus far, and even more excited that you came back to try out the game again.  I hope to keep up with the improvements all around, and will definitely add more content for date choices/ scenes.  Hugo's route is the first on my list to work on currently, which will be the main focus on the Patreon build.  Thanks again for the review  =3

Hi Wolfstar, i just played your game and boy it was good. I have a suggestion for you: the text color for some characters is too dark to be read (dark red) a brighter color, or background change could make reading easier. I cant wait for whats coming next.

Developer

Howlies AxlWolfang!

I have a feeling I know which character's text that could be.  I'll try out some text colors and have a change ready for the next update.  Thanks so much for playing the game dude!  I can't wait to post more.  Itchio should be getting a new update before January if everything continues to go smoothly   =3

Yo... I've played the original demo and admittedly I absolutely hated it. I hated the art style (for the most part, like I still liked the Tax man), the way the novel was written and also the idea of a game based purely on sex, but hot damn the new demo has changed my perception of the game by 180 degrees. Holey smokes I was SO wrong, this might just be one of my favorites VNs so far D: The art style while still not being perfect is VAAAAAAASTLY improved (And I actually like it), the colors you use aren't full on 100% saturation anymore, the new characters have thinner linework. The new sprite for Hyper is MILES ahead of the original one, also Hugo's is great :P (the fingers could be drawn a bit better but that's just nit picking) I honestly think that this improved art style fits the novel really well and gives it sort of a retro look. The story is actually.... really good to be honest O.o I love the occasional dreams with puzzles and ridiculous monsters :D and that whole BFP thing on Earth. Also the music is great! There isn't really much for me to criticize to be honest. I really loved it and I'm looking forward to more updates, I'll definitely be following you from now on :3. Again, this might just be on of my favorite VNs (better than Extracurricular Activities, YEAH I SAID IT!) ALSO THE CLIFFHANGER OML PLEASE! I NEED MORE O.O

Developer(+1)

Howlies Shin,

Thank you so much for playing the original game before, and for giving the recent demo a playthrough as well.  Your comment has made me so utterly pleased, I'm so glad to know that things have changed so much since rolling out the first chapter.  I can't thank you enough for coming back for another trial, I hope to crank out a lot more content, and not become shit down the road.  Thank you again Shin, there will be more to come soon   =3

Gotta say dude this game was hella fun! Though I wish I got more of time with Hugo but hopefully that'll happen in future updates, anyway I wish ya luck and hope you continue with this!


(Seriously more Hugo will be most appreciated~!) 

Developer

Howlies Teddie308,

Thanks for playing the demo dude!  We've been seeing a rise in demand for Hugo lately, and I'm happy to say that he is currently having his route worked upon.  Be on the lookout for more updates next year  =3   

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Love the game when is there going to be a update just finished

This cliff hanger thow 😭 I needs more all I know Fury aka Hyper can turn other people into demonic monsters like him

I hope I'm frazing it right

Developer

Stay tuned, there should be an update coming again before the month ends (so long as everything stays on track)

must say love ya game!!! My favorite alongside Blackgate and Extracurricular Activities <3

I got a question did you sacrificing a bit of the quality of the art in the game to get more progress done on the story? Because that seems efficient! By sacrificing a bit of quality to get more quantity for now and then improving the quality when it’s finished!

If not it’s good either way.

I was a bit surprised you decided to make hyper a semi-antagonist, his part of the story wouldn’t so happen to be related to wolfstar’s dreeaaam is it? a bit foreshadowing. ;)

Oh and also I like you made Cornelius either gay or bi because... the community isn’t so well... “favored” by allot of the Christian populace so making an angel rooting for the rainbows was an interesting writers choice!!

Overall can’t wait for the next build!!! (Unfortunately can’t donate to your patreon would if I could)

Developer (Edited 1 time)

Thanks for playing the demo Quane 101, I'm grateful for the feedback too.
Art assets that are currently used in the game are not safe from future alteration/ updating/ removal from the final game.
I'm hoping to hire on some artists down the road, but for now, all the work is up to yours truly  x3
Hyper's antagonist ways were definitely foreshadowed in the dream maze sequence, very good observation dude!
Cornelius the angel rooting for rainbows has now become my new favorite set of words. 
I can relate with not being able to throw money at your favorite artist.  If you can spread the word that this game exists though, that would be an awesome way to support us.  The more people who see it, the better!

Thank you again, and a new itchio update is scheduled to be released before this month ends.

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that would be One the best birthday gift!!! <3

Developer

Happy Early Birthday Wishes Dude  =3

i beat the game so when will be the next update?

Developer

More content coming next month  =3

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one more question about the game!! 

In wolfstars dream when he beats or helps monsters he gets new ability’s will these dreams have any impact in the real world? 

Developer

Not at the moment, but we are still in early development, so maybe in the future  =3

I see you updated the game again should I try from the beginning again or can I continue where I left off?

P.S I think an off patreon update blog will be helpful to those who can’t actively support you yet.

Developer

Yeah, gotta start all over again.  We may have found a way to avoid having to do that for the next update.  I'll keep itchio/Patreon up to date on if they have to redo the game again.  Sorry for the trouble  =3

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well after I was done restarting and played the update all I can say is a mix of hmm..., ha! and damn!!!

Eh heheh wolfstar literally sleeps with the enemy, his mortal enemy !!! That must’ve the ultimate angry sex!!  Where was Cornelius through all this ;)

Does that means wolfstar going to the church was just a dream...lol :)

I like your design of curiosity/lust vs ethics/morals, how this effects that in the long and short run.

Haaah...I absolutely can not wait to see how this happened. I will be waiting patiently for the next update <3

Developer

What better way to wake up in the morning than with your worst enemy, that'll get you out of bed fast!  

I'd love to answer all of your questions hopefully by the next update, especially in regards to Cornelius.  It makes me so happy to hear that you're enjoying the game with all of the craziness that has been happening.

Next itchio soft update coming at the end of this month.

I imagine it would go down like this https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=JTC1yLfKA2o skip to 00:40

I’m digging the new patreon font.

Give a spooky vibe

Developer

I'm diggin' the spooky vibe too  x3     We'll have to get back to being sexy soon though  =3

newest update is very dairyliscious! (bad cow puns :p)

Anymoo this build got allot of suspense.(I like suspense) from the weird zebra and shadow guy, the nightmare of wolfstars inner demon rage, to hyper, I mean fury attacking Rufus (to bad I liked him good boy for defending wolfstar).

What’s going to happen next build? Lemme guess!

Do wolfstar might have to kill someone? Is someone else going to intervene? Is he going to use the “beta wolf” to lead him to the “alpha”?

Developer

Bad cow puns are plentiful in the last update lol  Mooooooooooooooving right along  =3

We've got a lot of surprises coming, the story is getting rather intense  @.@!!

No one in Paradise is safe, especially our hero, Wolfstar.  Danger is lurking around every dark corner!   x3

Yooo Wolfstar! 

Ever since my last comment I haven't played any updates until now. I don't know how you do it but you keep putting a smile on my face :D As much as I might enjoy the gloomy atmosphere of Blackgate or the serious story of Echo, it is YOUR novel that keeps making me laugh, chuckle and ULTRA EXITED for what's coming up next. Like... in what other game can you make these amazing  cow jokes (<3) with your boss that you're dating that also happened to be a GIANT BULL? O.o mindlow.jpg And of course that character in the game just teleported a bunch of times and said to be continued JUST TO BE DRAMATIC xD As for the bad stuff there really isn't anything to be said from me O.o I'm pretty sure there were a few misspells but that's really nothing big. Once the game said something like "The elevator doors closes and continues to go up" or a misspell here or there but nothing major. I really liked the music as well! And holy shit there's gonna be A DIAGO ROUNTE??!? O.O Man I NEEED to play that shiz! (Will Cornelius have his own route? owo) Also Hugo is so friggin cute! I can't wait for more of his route x3 

Developer

Howlies Shin!

I'm excited to see that you're enjoying the story thus far.  There is definitely going to be a Dagio route in the game, (thanks to our Patreon voters we will get to go out with him soon [in chapter 4]).  I'll do my best to keep the bad stuff and spelling mistakes as non existent as possible.  As for a Cornelius route....well....It's possible   =3 

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enjoyed the update! <3 glad to see you back.

Why people want Dagio as a date option, beyond me. cant say that i liked it though. i give his character points for honesty(maybe) even for a demon. its obvious who put that tat where and who can guess why...  or not. :p. my only question is why didn't wolfstar ask dagio how he died, probably to mad and confused.

so the guard dogs double as attack hounds. hope the poor girls alright.

i wonder who that shifty broken elf's allegiance truly lies... probably to himself.(sorta respect that)

cant wait till next update

Developer

Howlies Quane101,

In the strange case of fan love for Dagio, I'm going to chalk it all up to "evil is sexy".  He won the poll for the next date scene, so we will likely get more information in Chapter 4.    Jenny and Dexter have their hands full, trapped in a building full of BFP guards.  "Shifty broken elf", that's a really good description of his character (I may need to use that sometime in the game lol).  I can't wait to see what happens next  >.<!!!

nice update as usual,

if Rufus does turn full beast i hope he still retains most of his normal form (cutie) 

Fury(hyper) seems to be cracking, tell me is the "true friend reminding you who you are" trope cliche because i'm fine with it.

so that's where rainbow angel been and the pimp bear may lose his kingdom who'll take his throne, i got a few ideas. 

Developer

Thank you kindly Quane101.  The fate of your friends hinges on your choices, I just hope you find my future art designs to be good either way.  x3

Hi I have a few suggestions for the game. I already wrote you on Twitter a few months ago but you haven't seen the message. ;-;

 I wish there was a version number for each demo because right now every demo is just called 1.0 and it is kinda confusing to be honest. There should also be a more detailed changelog since "more content" is kinda vague xD And I also wish there was a way to skip chapters so you don't have to play through the whole game every update. 

Anyway, love the game I wish you the best of luck with it :P

Developer

Howlies Shin,  sorry if I missed your message on Twitter.  I keep forgetting to check the requested messages because no one else does that (stupid Twitter).  New version numbers have been implemented as of the latest updates.  We're on version 3 now--I'm using a different form of renpy then my mate Dyne, so we have a harder time getting things like version updates out.  I felt really foolish when we discovered where the version number code was hiding too  x3    

As far as the content logs go, we'll be more specific as Chapter 4 brings about our main branching pathways.  Finally the power of choice will be in the capable paws of the player as to where they'd like the story to go.  We'll be sure to mention which of the six main routes (Alex, Janus, Hugo, Rufus, and Dagio) are getting updated.

As for skipping chapters, hopefully with the new techniques we've been working with, players will no longer have to start over their saves from the beginning anymore.  New variables can be made and still be able to avoid this scenario. 

Thank you for playing the game, and for commenting.  Stay tuned for more  =3

You mean the options.rpy? xD Well the newest demo zip is still called "[...].1.0-pc" So is it for the Patreon only release for now?

Developer

Yessir    =3