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How do you like the game?

A topic by Wolfstar created Apr 18, 2017 Views: 1,101 Replies: 28
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Developer

Feedback is greatly appreciated, thank you for your time =3

Alright, so I played the game, and despite your art style not exactly being my cup of tea (I'm not really for hyper-bara, but you actually did pretty good on this and the art rubbed off on me. The only one that was a bit much for me was Janus) it was actually pretty good. The story actually got me hooked, and I can't wait for updates~ oh! and the few CGs seem a bit off from the character sprites, and I really like the charecter sprites!

Developer

Thanks for playing the game, we'll likely see the art end evolve over time (I practice everyday). Hyper-bara is not always my mission, when I draw I tend to draw large (blames his high school teacher), at this time none of the assets, sprites/bg/sfx, are safe from being replaced as the development process continues. I'm very happy to hear that the story end is what you like the most. Thanks again dragonboy888! =3

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I'm being a little harsh, it is really good still! I really liked Alex, his design was my favorite of all! Also, it's not completely hyper-bara per say, just some of the characters have pretty exaggerated muscles. But all in all. I do love your writing <3

Developer

Thank you so much!  There will be a great deal of art evolution to come  =3

fox wants update

Developer

You're in luck.  The next update is coming soon, likely at the end of the week.  I'm having a second update this month because the first update was a short one, (lots of new art assets, but very little story).  Thanks for playing, and make sure to check back often for new content  =3

i am, breh.

stay fluffy

Developer

New Stuff is here again  =3

I'm definitely enjoying the game so far, looking forward to the next update!

Developer

Thank you so much ZalHaar, I can't wait to see what happens next!   =3

im not gonna lie i really enjoyed the writing and character/world building but it feels as if the story doesn't know what it wants to be.A action adventure a romance or a thriller.But i enjoyed alot of it you clearly know your characters and for that i applaud almost nobody can write characters that feel human.is it just you working on the game or a team? Because its rather good eather way! 

Developer

Thank you kindly cmim2507.  I'm glad that you enjoy the characters, and the evolving story.  I'm really happy with the latest work,  about 90% of all the work is my doing.  I have reliable bug testers now, as well as my friends who know what to do when coding errors arise to help me along the way.  Please check back often for more updates  =3

I was playing throw the janus thread when a problem occurred when Jenny tried to read her mails.

Followingthe crash report.


I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/Jenny1.rpy", line 175, in script
Exception: String u'[We must have really impressed him, who knew data collection could take us so far? You have me to thank for keeping us organized and running efficiently.-' ends with an open format operation.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/Jenny1.rpy", line 175, in script
  File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 613, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, interact=self.interact)
  File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 1142, in say
    who(what, interact=interact)
  File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\character.py", line 867, in __call__
    what = what_pattern.replace("[what]", sub(what, translate=translate))
  File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\character.py", line 849, in sub
    return renpy.substitutions.substitute(s, scope=scope, force=force, translate=translate)[0]
  File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\substitutions.py", line 232, in substitute
    s = formatter.vformat(s, (), kwargs)
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 563, in vformat
  File "/home/tom/ab/x64lucid-deps/install/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 572, in _vformat
  File "D:\wolfstar_sins_and_paradise-1.0-pc\renpy\substitutions.py", line 157, in parse
    raise Exception("String {0!r} ends with an open format operation.".format(s))
Exception: String u'[We must have really impressed him, who knew data collection could take us so far? You have me to thank for keeping us organized and running efficiently.-' ends with an open format operation.

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.12.2.2029
wolfstar_sins_and_paradise 1.0

Developer

Howlies Alessan.  Thank you for the bug report, I greatly appreciate it.   For this error we had a stray bracket marker that is causing the error.  I'm trying my best to remove brackets from my writing style, because they cause errors in renpy, looks like I missed another one.  Rest assured that this will be removed in time for the next itchio build.   An update is coming soon.  Thanks again!   =3

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Game not bad after all, I dislike this kind of art but it grew in me a little(Pretty much a lot). Some part of there were funny, story is great, music is good, character is hot, romance me like very much, what I rate this? 4/5

Music: 3/5

Story: 4/5

romance: 4/5

Character: NA (To hot for this)

I only tried the demo not the game yet. I was hoping for Hugo at the demo as well(LOL), but it still great so far. Keep up the good work! Good Luck and Have Fun(At work huehuehue).

One last thing, there more story then the demo right? Like full version, but still updating.

Developer

Thank you kindly IPlayAllDay.  I'm happy with the scores thus far, and even more excited that you came back to try out the game again.  I hope to keep up with the improvements all around, and will definitely add more content for date choices/ scenes.  Hugo's route is the first on my list to work on currently, which will be the main focus on the Patreon build.  Thanks again for the review  =3

Hi Wolfstar, i just played your game and boy it was good. I have a suggestion for you: the text color for some characters is too dark to be read (dark red) a brighter color, or background change could make reading easier. I cant wait for whats coming next.

Developer

Howlies AxlWolfang!

I have a feeling I know which character's text that could be.  I'll try out some text colors and have a change ready for the next update.  Thanks so much for playing the game dude!  I can't wait to post more.  Itchio should be getting a new update before January if everything continues to go smoothly   =3

Yo... I've played the original demo and admittedly I absolutely hated it. I hated the art style (for the most part, like I still liked the Tax man), the way the novel was written and also the idea of a game based purely on sex, but hot damn the new demo has changed my perception of the game by 180 degrees. Holey smokes I was SO wrong, this might just be one of my favorites VNs so far D: The art style while still not being perfect is VAAAAAAASTLY improved (And I actually like it), the colors you use aren't full on 100% saturation anymore, the new characters have thinner linework. The new sprite for Hyper is MILES ahead of the original one, also Hugo's is great :P (the fingers could be drawn a bit better but that's just nit picking) I honestly think that this improved art style fits the novel really well and gives it sort of a retro look. The story is actually.... really good to be honest O.o I love the occasional dreams with puzzles and ridiculous monsters :D and that whole BFP thing on Earth. Also the music is great! There isn't really much for me to criticize to be honest. I really loved it and I'm looking forward to more updates, I'll definitely be following you from now on :3. Again, this might just be on of my favorite VNs (better than Extracurricular Activities, YEAH I SAID IT!) ALSO THE CLIFFHANGER OML PLEASE! I NEED MORE O.O

Developer(+1)

Howlies Shin,

Thank you so much for playing the original game before, and for giving the recent demo a playthrough as well.  Your comment has made me so utterly pleased, I'm so glad to know that things have changed so much since rolling out the first chapter.  I can't thank you enough for coming back for another trial, I hope to crank out a lot more content, and not become shit down the road.  Thank you again Shin, there will be more to come soon   =3

Gotta say dude this game was hella fun! Though I wish I got more of time with Hugo but hopefully that'll happen in future updates, anyway I wish ya luck and hope you continue with this!


(Seriously more Hugo will be most appreciated~!) 

Developer

Howlies Teddie308,

Thanks for playing the demo dude!  We've been seeing a rise in demand for Hugo lately, and I'm happy to say that he is currently having his route worked upon.  Be on the lookout for more updates next year  =3   

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Love the game when is there going to be a update just finished

This cliff hanger thow 😭 I needs more all I know Fury aka Hyper can turn other people into demonic monsters like him

I hope I'm frazing it right

Developer

Stay tuned, there should be an update coming again before the month ends (so long as everything stays on track)

must say love ya game!!! My favorite alongside Blackgate and Extracurricular Activities <3

I got a question did you sacrificing a bit of the quality of the art in the game to get more progress done on the story? Because that seems efficient! By sacrificing a bit of quality to get more quantity for now and then improving the quality when it’s finished!

If not it’s good either way.

I was a bit surprised you decided to make hyper a semi-antagonist, his part of the story wouldn’t so happen to be related to wolfstar’s dreeaaam is it? a bit foreshadowing. ;)

Oh and also I like you made Cornelius either gay or bi because... the community isn’t so well... “favored” by allot of the Christian populace so making an angel rooting for the rainbows was an interesting writers choice!!

Overall can’t wait for the next build!!! (Unfortunately can’t donate to your patreon would if I could)

Developer (Edited 1 time)

Thanks for playing the demo Quane 101, I'm grateful for the feedback too.
Art assets that are currently used in the game are not safe from future alteration/ updating/ removal from the final game.
I'm hoping to hire on some artists down the road, but for now, all the work is up to yours truly  x3
Hyper's antagonist ways were definitely foreshadowed in the dream maze sequence, very good observation dude!
Cornelius the angel rooting for rainbows has now become my new favorite set of words. 
I can relate with not being able to throw money at your favorite artist.  If you can spread the word that this game exists though, that would be an awesome way to support us.  The more people who see it, the better!

Thank you again, and a new itchio update is scheduled to be released before this month ends.

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that would be One the best birthday gift!!! <3

Developer

Happy Early Birthday Wishes Dude  =3