[Renpy] [KN] [Proofreadering] Looking for 3 Proofreaders

TheOslaf5 years ago(+1)

Hi, you can add me at my Discord

Yeah, i wanna in to proofread your game.

I don't have a discord account. Is that a problem?
If not I give you the link to the KN. I made it available for PC and Mac.
https://videavice.itch.io/rowan-reed-purity?secret=tsVfBWpsX4fllYD2yqptMk3H8

I thought you could share the correction on a .txt or here in the comments.
Anyway, let's see if you can even open it at first. :)

Thanks for your time.

I'd be happy to proof read your game for you ^_^

Thanks I give you the link https://videavice.itch.io/rowan-reed-purity?secret=tsVfBWpsX4fllYD2yqptMk3H8
I'm looking forward for your recommendation either here or link me to a .txt

Thanks again.

carolgrrr5 years ago(+1)

I would also like to help with proofreading, but I am unable to access your game. I clicked the link and clicked Download Now, and I've been watching an infinite "Loading" animation ever since.

Sorry to hear it.

That's weird. I managed to start the download.
Tell me what system you're using (PC or Mac) so I'll upload the game on google drive.

carolgrrr5 years ago

I'm on a Mac (OS X 10.13.6) and tried downloading in both Safari and Chrome with no luck. Thanks

There it is. https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_-WYCwwpyU-G7YT7x2fOE2bvnkTIuJpE

carolgrrr5 years ago

I downloaded it but couldn't unzip the file. : (

VideaVice5 years ago(+1)

Now I really don't know what going on. I'll try to reupload the file.

Little Missy Otome®5 years ago (1 edit)

Hi VideaVice, For some reason when I tried to download your game, it said that your page couldn't be found :( Edit: Nevermind it shows the page, but now it's just loading endlessly :(

You might need to upload your game to an external drive, so I can download it from there. I had the exact same problem with the secret URL for my game :( I hope they can fix it soon.

Mac - https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_-WYCwwpyU-G7YT7x2fOE2bvnkTIuJpE

Yeah

I uploaded the game elsewhere

PC - https://drive.google.com/open?id=1TFIg-iCCOWF-1GB5EkL1rAvubgQVzO6A

Let me know if it works.

TheOslaf5 years ago(+1)

No matter what i try or do, i can't download this at all. Sorry.

Mac - https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_-WYCwwpyU-G7YT7x2fOE2bvnkTIuJpE

Yeah

I uploaded the game elsewhere

PC - https://drive.google.com/open?id=1TFIg-iCCOWF-1GB5EkL1rAvubgQVzO6A

Let me know if it works.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1XjKPEes1AwnG0KyXB5FVX4kVrWC7uXh2/view?usp=shari...

Hi VideaVice!

I've Proofread some of the script. :)

The story is really interesting BTW

Here's my notes for whoever wants to take over from me :D

It seems that everything that can go wrong in one's life is happening to me right now so it might take some time til I come back at you.
I will look the corrections. I can't wait how many embarrassing thing I left in the script .
Thanks for helping.

Tell you what. Since the others are having trouble accessing your game, I'll finish proof reading the entire thing for you :)

I'll attach an updated script once I'm done ^_^

TheOslaf5 years ago(+1)

I'm sorry to hear that, hope to hear from you soon.