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[Renpy] [KN] [Proofreadering] Looking for 3 Proofreaders

A topic by VideaVice created Aug 02, 2018 Views: 389 Replies: 22
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Hello, 

I'm making a kinetic novel right now and I was wondering if I could get at least three members of this community to proofread my game. 

It's a less than 30 min long conversation so you'll be back to your respective lives pretty quick. And of course, you'll be credited for your efforts.

Drop your names in the comments if you're interested. 

Thanks

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Hi, you can add me at my  Discord

Yeah, i wanna in to proofread your game.

I don't have a discord account. Is that a problem?
If not I give you the link to the KN. I made it available for PC and Mac.
https://videavice.itch.io/rowan-reed-purity?secret=tsVfBWpsX4fllYD2yqptMk3H8

I thought you could share the correction on a .txt or here in the comments.
Anyway, let's see if you can even open it at first. :)

Thanks for your time.

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I'd be happy to proof read your game for you ^_^ 

Thanks I give you the link https://videavice.itch.io/rowan-reed-purity?secret=tsVfBWpsX4fllYD2yqptMk3H8
I'm looking forward for your recommendation either here or link me to a .txt

Thanks again.

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I would also like to help with proofreading, but I am unable to access your game. I clicked the link and clicked Download Now, and I've been watching an infinite "Loading" animation ever since. 

Sorry to hear it.

That's weird. I managed to start the download. 
Tell me what system you're using (PC or Mac) so I'll upload the game on google drive.

I'm on a Mac (OS X 10.13.6) and tried downloading in both Safari and Chrome with no luck. Thanks

There it is. https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_-WYCwwpyU-G7YT7x2fOE2bvnkTIuJpE

I downloaded it but couldn't unzip the file.  : (

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Now I really don't know what going on. I'll try to reupload the file.

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Hi VideaVice, For some reason when I tried to download your game, it said that your page couldn't be found :( Edit: Nevermind it shows the page, but now it's just loading endlessly :(
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You might need to upload your game to an external drive, so I can download it from there. I had the exact same problem with the secret URL for my game :( I hope they can fix it soon.

Yeah 

I uploaded the game elsewhere

Mac - https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_-WYCwwpyU-G7YT7x2fOE2bvnkTIuJpE

PC - https://drive.google.com/open?id=1TFIg-iCCOWF-1GB5EkL1rAvubgQVzO6A

Let me know if it works.

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No matter what i try or do, i can't download this at all. Sorry.

Yeah 

I uploaded the game elsewhere

Mac - https://drive.google.com/open?id=1_-WYCwwpyU-G7YT7x2fOE2bvnkTIuJpE

PC - https://drive.google.com/open?id=1TFIg-iCCOWF-1GB5EkL1rAvubgQVzO6A

Let me know if it works.

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Hi VideaVice!

I've Proofread some of the script. :)

The story is really interesting BTW

Here's my notes for whoever wants to take over from me :D

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1XjKPEes1AwnG0KyXB5FVX4kVrWC7uXh2/view?usp=shari...

It seems that everything that can go wrong in one's life is happening to me right now so it might take some time  til I come back at you.
I will look the corrections. I can't wait how many embarrassing thing I left in the script  .
Thanks for helping.   

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Tell you what. Since the others are having trouble accessing your game, I'll finish proof reading the entire thing for you  :)

I'll attach an updated script once I'm done ^_^ 

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I'm sorry to hear that, hope to hear from you soon.

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Hi VideaVice!

I've finished proofreading your entire novel :)

This document includes the FULL editing for the entire script.

So please refer to this document, instead of the first one I uploaded!

I hope this helps ^_^

Feel free to get someone to overlook my corrections as well :D

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ztITHtgPnXjoE37zuac-Avp8JSOw3IROPK6sfy74RX0/...

 I'll make the correction soon. Thanks for your hard work.

No problem! Glad I could help ^_^