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So, your first post is to say that?
I’m guessing either your are the same person or you are just another troll that try to defend this one by calling it’s antagonist stupid.

Okay, just tried the new version and interesting how you change that introduction dialogue.
However, I would like to point out something else I have noticed about it:
Second person and first person pronounces are mixed.
For example, in:

He’d probably waited a long time for this day, to stop being limited by us. But you never resented him.

Here in that context:

• “us” is a first person pronounce ; This is a “I and my”, a reference to self.
• “you” is a second person pronounce ; This is a… “you”, a reference to someone else.

So, either the “us” should be “you both”, or “you” should be I.

Also:

Wooooow… He’s so huge…

Shouldn’t it be “It” instead of “He” given that this sentence refers to the mall?

Yet it’s understandable, but yes, the MC could have grown more understandable as the discussion goes, though it’s true that “the stranger” need some psychiatric help.

So, I tried it and got the DOOMED ending, and it’s okay to me.

However, I noticed soon enough that some of the image in the script didn’t match their name in the ‘images’ sub-folder.
So, for those that would want to try the game, save the following code as “patch.rpy” and put it in the game folder beforehand:

init offset = 99

image pasbientroublé = "pasbientrouble.png"
image troubléshy = "troubleshy.png"
image troublésmile = "troublesmile.png"

Really short patch as you can see.

Since ChromOS seems to be a branch based on Linux, I would the “best download” would be the Linux one.
But seriously, it’s mainly just Chrome as an OS, I’m not sure you can really run this game on it.

You know you can go to your settings and activate ‘Prefer Markdown input where available’.

Then you will be able to use the triple back-ticks (```) to enclose codes, tracebacks, errors, etc.
Like:

```
SCRIPT ERROR: Invalid get index 'L59L1  21' (on base: 'Dictionary').

   at: update (res://gui_modules/Exploration/Scripts/room.gd:24) - Invalid get index 'L59L1  21' (on base: 'Dictionary').

SCRIPT ERROR: Invalid get index 'L59L1  22' (on base: 'Dictionary').

   at: update (res://gui_modules/Exploration/Scripts/room.gd:24) - Invalid get index 'L59L1  22' (on base: 'Dictionary').
```

That will give :

SCRIPT ERROR: Invalid get index 'L59L1  21' (on base: 'Dictionary').

   at: update (res://gui_modules/Exploration/Scripts/room.gd:24) - Invalid get index 'L59L1  21' (on base: 'Dictionary').

SCRIPT ERROR: Invalid get index 'L59L1  22' (on base: 'Dictionary').

   at: update (res://gui_modules/Exploration/Scripts/room.gd:24) - Invalid get index 'L59L1  22' (on base: 'Dictionary').

Isn’t that better to read?

Edit : Or you can also click ‘¶’ (that is the Format button) then ‘Code’ when not using Markdown.

Personally, if I had a child, I would prefer to die than to sell my child to anyone, whatever the circumstances may be.
Yet of course the hate for Jeffery Epstein would also be here, but less for the purchase than what he does after.

Regardless, as you pointed out in your other comment, those two cases have nothing in common and this comparison is horrendous.

So, I tried the underworld path and I met Envy.
I really like Steven and have done all his scenes beforehand, looking forward for more.
Then… this Envy gave a lot of question to my mind and I got uneasy about the whole situation.
I wonder what is planed with this one and if we will be able to help the former owner of it’s body to become aware and regain control or if the whole will lead to some kind of NTR/NTS/Cheating feast.

However, wonderful game, really love it so far, however short it is. Though as mentioned above, a bit worry about what is planed (but I’m not asking any spoil on that regard).

Aside of that, I also wanted to state that, as far as my understanding goes – and I’m no expert in english, but –:

• siblings = same parents’s children, so relatives
• step-siblings = children of the spouse of one of the parents, so not relatives
• half-siblings = children of one of the parents, so half-relatives

So okay, step-siblings are not relatives, but half-siblings are. Well, they are half-relatives, but still we can’t say that they are not since it would theoretically presume that they are not even half.
I think the whole sentence could be rewritten as follow:

We’re brothers with a year difference in age. Only half-relatives though since we have different fathers.

Instead of:

We’re brothers. Not relatives, we have different fathers and a year difference in age.

Okay, just looked your profile, your are just a troll.

I think I understand what you meant and that it connects to what I was saying about have some other CGs in some specific scenes.

If I understand correctly, you are talking about the fact that Dax is supposed to have his helmet on until we removed it from him in the cave even if his shown without the whole time.
However if that is the case, you are mistaken because this scene does not imply that we already have views on him, but simply that despite our conditioning we could not bring ourselves to let anyone die like that. That’s paradoxical, I know.

But maybe I’m just overthinking it and you were just making petty fun of it.

I would have like too, but considering the MC and the fact that the other option is “Lewd route”, I really don’t think it will be. It seems to be more of a filter for those that are or not interested in such characters.

This game is good, even though there is some issues, like the fact that some dialogues repeats and that there is a cruel lack of punctuation at times (at least in the English version).
Some other CGs could have been good in some specific scenes to be more coherent with what is described.
The voice acting is very sparse and different from what I would have imagined, so I tried to put the Voice volume to 0, but this have no effect since it seems like they are played on the Sound channel instead of the Voice one. By the way, once played on the right channel, it could be cool to also have a Moans channel, that way we could turn off the voices will keeping the moaning sounds.

The love building between the two protagonist is good enough considering their background, but it could have been better (I will not enter into details though) and their background looks somewhat too much exaggerated at times.
Their dialogues about their backgrounds even seems sometime to be some sort of a battle about who have it worse.

Something that bother me is when Dax asks us about what we like the most about him and that our options is his ass or his cock.
Like, seriously? I know it’s a way to know what content to show, but then the question could have been something more in the line and approached more differently.
Seriously… It’s like “Do you want to marry me?”, “Yes, I would want to marry your cock.” hahaha, lol.
Plus, this choice reflects the common idea of either being a top or a bottom and never both.

On another subject, there are some error about the pronounces and adjectives, and at times some other kind of words (again, in the English version, I don’t know too much about Spanish).
There is also some times where there is an inversion of which character is talking and some other time there is not even a name, this is not uncommon but the more we advance the more there are.

Also, transition between the end of a sex scene and the resume to the story is sometime radical and weird. Same with the music, they could use some fade-out transition.

On the good side however, the plot is good, the plot twist even more.
However, I think that the character are sometime missing better reasoning or intelligence and some arguments are slammed from the ass.
Also, I will not tell too mush to not spoil, but the flashback we got latter in the story contradict some things that was said earlier in the story (well, some things were already contradicted, but it’s a bit more obvious there).

Anyway, one last thing I would want to say is about two names.
First, Dax. It can be not common, but I don’t see how it could raise any suspicion that the bearer of such name is not human. Its entire name (Daxher) maybe could, but not just Dax.
Second, Angela. Remove the last ‘a’ and you got Angel as a nickname… Hum, yeah… very different and must have required great imagination to find, right?

All that said, I look forward to the next release.

Ash

Though for know there is no real interaction with him* aside from buying furniture from his shop afaik.

Apparently, no, I have tried in the latest version here (v0.7.11) to select Penis + Testicles in the Sex section with Feminine in the Gender section, but it still leads to us being a Trap.

Edit: Was going to say forget what I said because I then noticed that Penis + Boobs leads to Dickgirl (more commonly named Shemale ; as I do in my other comment), but this doesn’t change that the remaining still simply leads to Trap.

But now that I rethink of it, what could be the right term for the combination I mentioned above? Feminine but without Boobs and with a Penis… Well, I would personally expect the term Femboy.

Another observation is that when choosing the gender of our guardian, Trap is the 4th choice… But of course I do understand that changing that will maybe require more than the 4 box standard of the introduction, so… I don’t know, maybe this one can stay as is since, as explained, this can be seen as a catch-all remaining terms.

That being said, I suggest you to see the second part of my other comment on this regard below.

Just noticed this thread and so, here is my answer to it.

First of, I will confirm that I often seen this term used as a slur too; Or at least in a negative way. However, rarely in products (like games) that features them with this word, of course, but more like in comment of such products or sometime in some channels of some platforms or IRL.

That being said, this is effectively generally not use to be knowingly transphobic, but more like as a slander, stating that it’s either to lure those of the sex opposite to the one they appear to be or to get closer to people of the sex they appear to be (hence this word).

Plus, the people using this word generally don’t know the difference between a trans person, a transvestite (now called cross-dresser), a femboy/tomboy (I have even see someone use the term tomgirl recently ; I’m still not sure if this was really simply an error or if there really a meaning behind this), and a shemale, but even when they do, some will generally still think that it’s the shit and will keep using this term.

Secondly, to be clear about the terms:

• the term Trap is generally destined to the transvestite people (though, as said above, many will either don’t care or have a clue of what they are talking about)
• the term Trans refers to trans people regardless if they have taken hormone or not intend to undergo transition
• the term Cross-dresser (formerly Transvestite) refers to people that dress themselves to look like the opposite gender (hence the new choice of word) without thinking themselves to be of said gender, they will also fake boobs or try to mask them depending of the target gender
• the term Femboy refers to male people that like to dress feminine-like and some of them may also act –to some degree– akin
• the term Tomboy refers to female people that like to dress masculine-like and some of them may also act –to some degree– akin
• the term Shemale refers to people that have a female body but with male genitalia
  • I don’t know of any consensus about an antonym of Shemale, but I think the one use in this game (Cuntboy) fit well

I’m no expert however, but I think it’s correct enough.

I will just add: Same issue with Shy Futa characters.
And I will also confirm that it didn’t happened in previous versions (like in v0.10.0).

Huh? I always rejected her and do Abbadon’s ‘Traditions’ quest.
So, I don’t know why, but maybe, as the header of your comment suggest it, it was just a bug introduced in the version you mentioned (0.7.11).

Edit:

Wait… Now that I re-read your comment, I am not sure of whom you are talking about since there are no bunny girl as far as I know during the quest ‘The premier’. At first, I thought you was talking about Alba during the introduction, but it’s not bunny girl either.
Plus, ‘The premier’ is pretty straight forward, I made a new run trying each of its outcome and the ‘Traditions’ quest was still there for me to go trough.

I’m also wondering before considering if I will give it try or not.

Like, I would like to know if it will be possible to have some romance with the handsome black-haired guy? Maybe even a three-way relationship with him and one the girls?

In other words, will there be Gay content? Already guessing the answer, but just to be sure.

From you comment, I thought that you were for Netorare, but then I saw your profile… So I understand that you’re in fact not.

Anyway, games and reality are two distinct things. In real life things happen and we just have to take decisions accordingly to them, in games, fetish are included for those that are into them and an option can be present to prevent them from happening for those that are not into them.

Then again, there is – at least – two ways to implement such an option :

1. Just making it so we don’t see the concerned scenes (this is generally considered the worse one – for good reasons)
2. Making a second branch in which the concerned characters never interact – or even never seek to interact – in such way.

Note: I don’t know which one it is in this game as I didn’t try it yet.

Ok, thanks for those informations, though I’m not sure about what shopkeeper you are talking about.

However, about “like being handled roughly”, that’s what mean when I was talking about rape apology (just noticed that it had been reverse translated to “rape patronage”).

But sure, as I had also mentioned, in some scene there it’s clear that there is no doubt in the lack of consent.

As a final note I confirm you that you can top the centaur and concerning the wereslut I preferred to pat her ^^’.

Topping opponents rarely does anything. Letting them top you often lets you win

Uh… isn’t that the opposite? From my experience I never win by letting them top me and I had to win the battle another way contrarily to when I topped them this makes the battle ends.

What famous scene? You mean Orc? Her partner loved it. Or you mean Ogre Wanderer encounter? Well, you can escape relatively unscathed.

No, I already manage these two. “Her partner loved it.”, that’s only the words from the Orc side, we would need the words of the other’s side, but… strangely it scattered once we intervened XD. Concerning the Ogre Wanderer, we can simply convince him to leave (although it’s sure as hell that one day he will end up impaled by one ^^’).
No, I was really taking about one scene when, if we fail a test, we are the victim, and if not, then our compagnon is and we just leave. (as a hint, this is a scene about a warg and a fallen noble)

those enemies that give you pregnancy

Yeah… a rectum pregnancy.

there are female unnamed characters mentioned time to time

The fact is that many presented as woman but none of those had a female reproductive organ, so are you sure those 8 female characters ? Like the witch, are you sure about her ? (I can’t know about the prostitutes however since as mentioned above I’m not into brothels and such)

There are 4 enemies capable of laying eggs.

I had forgot about the spider… ^^’

However, I should note that I didn’t got very far in the game yet as I haven’t reaches the Xiuh mountain, the Fort, and the mossy expense so far.

Basically, to summarize this game:

• love to be taken and you are a whore who loses her dignity, sometimes part of her will, and sometimes also gains in femininity.
• like to take and it’s ok (no gain but also no loss).
• (not tested directly because I like neither brothels nor bars, but from what I read in some subjects and on the wiki) go to the brothel or get drunk and you gain will.
• satisfy your opponent by letting him take you during a fight, but you should still beat him.
• satisfy your opponent by taking him during a fight and you win.

Apart from that, this game also does quite a bit of rape patronage, although there are some scenes where no doubt has been left on the fact that it is (there is for example this famous scene where there is a risk that we are the victim, and because of this fact our character does not even have the choice to try to save this victim. Are we really better than this victim, then?).

Also, I’m not really sure the reason behind this choice that the developers made, but I’m a bit doubtful about the reproductive capacity of the characters since none of them has a female reproductive organ (the only case I saw was a wasp who laid his eggs in the rectum of a human… But how were these eggs fertilized? Or are wasp hermaphroditic and self-fertilizing themselves from the inside? And is it an allegory of the end of humanity?).

So you only read the part you want and comment about it without understanding it fully and yet it’s me the “dick-for-brains caveman” that “don’t see the bigger picture”?

Maybe stop drinking too much. You are just reading things like a sheep, I have read your other comments and you seem to be just a stuck-up stubborn old hag. You can’t even see when someone is just make use of understatements, innuendo, or humor.

First,

Think about it more with your head and less with your lower pelvis, chief. 👌

I think its more you than you than me that think with lower pelvis here.

Then,

It does make sense though. You’re just not seeing the bigger picture for lore and plot.

Yet you’re still not explaining how, you’re not explaining your point, and so mine still stand.

Plus, I already explained how being able to change the MC’s name could not have any impact on the story, lore and plot.

And for those that just want to follow that story without changing the MC’s name, they can still specify one and stay with it and this don’t change anything for them.

A bit late, but I just want to say that your answer don’t make any sens.

I don’t see how being able to specify a name we can more relate to for the MC can lessen anything, on the contrary, if anything it will make us more immersed in the story and transcend the perceived emotions.

Concretely speaking, MC’ name don’t seem to bear any special meaning in the story, so whatever it is shouldn’t change anything.

Technically speaking, it’s very simple to implement, straightforward, and fast to apply this change to any mention his name with a simple regexp replacement (if not just a search and replace all).

I have not reach the “Heist on the high castle” quest yet (I will have to continue my play-trough some time), so I can’t argue on its completion.

As for the rest, this is a text based game were everything is lay on your imagination with some description to help you in this process.
Of course, I guess a map will certainly help at some point, but I think that with the wright description it will not be a necessity.

As for castle’s style, I personally imagine it as medieval, but that’s all the power of a text based game, anyone can imagine it as see fit.

I don’t agree with your actual criticism.

First of all, you seem to have misunderstood how the plague dispatch (maybe you miss some part of the lore because of your choices?). However it’s true that it’s not us that can dispatch the plague, but anyone that had been infected by it.
Or do you mean in the lab? Then effectively were are the only that can dispatch more of the plague to corrupt the remaniant of the city (or to try to find a cure for it) since we are the only one to have access to it.

As for being the only one able of “corrupting anything” because of our own unique capabilities, many – like myself – don’t like that, so I think it’s good that this game is not about that.
That said, if you like games like that, there is Corrupted Kingdom and many other like those I seen you have comment (Echoes of Home, Crossworlds).

Finally, about the “conservative or naive” part, I think it makes sense for those that succeed to not fall to the plague, as the MC itself (well, again, depending on your choices).

So, I don’t think there is anything to remove the narrative. Review it and fixe some grammar error, yes, but removing anything, no.

Ok, thanks to clarify this.

I guess that the sentence imply that we are just repeating her name just after she said it and she bow at that? I could imagine that.

Huh… No?

Either my english is very bad, but then so is the online translator I use to try understanding this portion.

Either way, from the last citation I had made :

Zephyra briefly bowed down to you after you spoke her name.

What I understand is that we spoke her name and that then she bowed to us at that. It’s not her saying her name to us and then bows.

However, just putting — Zephyra. is not clear as there is not indication as who is talking.

When we first meet Zephyra there is those following lines:

The miniature girl reacted to your appearance unexpectedly nonchalantly.

— Zephyra.

Zephyra briefly bowed down to you after you spoke her name.

But I never had a dialog where her name were mentioned, even when asking about champions at the church, so this don’t seem to make sense.

By the way, I find it unfortunate that Pregnancy:Interbreed is no longer a thing and that now there is only Progenecy, which is only for the main character.

Meaning that, for example, a cute goblin NPC can’t impregnate a famous half-breed bunny NPC.

When we brought her the elf she asked, we are mentioned instead of the elf.

For example, let pose that we named ourself Myself, we will get the following :

Myself gives you a worried look as they disappear …

After a few hours Myself returns back …

Personally I didn’t have any issue keeping their spirit above 80% if not near their maximum, you just need to choose carefully.

However I agree that it is strange that when choosing a positive training option categorized as kink that there is still a chance of loosing spirit.

That said, I would also want to point out that the Maid Dress give a +1 for spirit.

Warlock and Witch are respectively restricted for non-female and non-male, but I think they should also have respectively :

• Conflicting Class: Witch
• Conflicting Class: Warlock

Because otherwise it seems that futas can have both.

I can confirm that there is gay content in it, yes. Though I personally don’t like the available male characters for that and my favorite characters are Ziya, Kani, and Nikka.

However, you may stumble into an exception like the following :

While running game code:
  File "game/E8_H_M.rpy", line 1137, in <module>
TypeError: coercing to Unicode: need string or buffer, RevertableList found

When that happen, just click Ignore.

shrines (sanctuary) are in found when doing dungeons, they are indicated with a i symbole. As for the offering, as ambergrain mentioned, you just have to ask your subordinate to go to the shrine.

As talked in this other thread, you can use a Writ Of Exemption to make a slave becomes a subordinate, you can found them in the Servants Guild Shop, and for subordinate to slave, there is apparently a shrine you for that.

I dont know how it was in the previous version but for sure I don’t agree with the reply of Strive4Power.

Strive4Pwer, I personally think that custom portrait is not ideal as it make the thing less consistent. Maybe it ease your work as then you think that you don’t have to bother yourself to fix and better the character creator.

However, if you think you can still bother a little, there is mostly two things that is missing in the MC creator :

• chin
• nose

They are present in the character creator of our first compagnon however, so it’s not a technical issue but just an omission.

When starting such interaction with two NCPs (so without us, the “Master”), they still referring to us.
For example, one could say :

Hmh, leering over my body, Master?

I am not sure if it’s on purpose or not, I just know that it feels weird to me as I just want them to indulge themselves without consideration of me.

On the same line, every interaction with Daisy seems to refer to how rough we are with her, even if every interaction I pick are gentle and it’s her with another NPC whom I find makes a cute couple with her. I will mention that in this playtrough I decided that I don’t care if her current attire don’t fit my standing and that she don’t deserve more than others to have tailor-made clothes (hoping that this will block other events like the kidnapping).

Also, even when there is zero of such interact left, every character on the list still have the green √ instead of the red x.