I can only agree with you. In hind sight I should have just added a picture which atleast explains something. But I was so tired after working through tje night :(. Thank you for your feedback
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Had to install OpenGNN again and then missed the deadline :(
Thank you for taking the time to write detailed feedback!
I would have loved to introduce the mechanics a level per level basis to ease the player into them, but I was unsure how to do that effectively. Therefore the one page in the menu. I'm not sure if splitting the mechanics to different sites would have helped, my guess is that would fell even more daunting then before, because you have multiply pages.
I didn't explicitly wrote in the introduction that the Souls had to be "pushed'' into the gate, that is true. I can see where this can lead to confusion.
Souls getting stuck was sadly somewhat common, I thought I had fixed it by allowing the Keeper and Dog to go a bit below the bounds of the souls, but likely I forgot that above.
Interesting bug you discovered with resetting the stages :D
Interesting concept of managing different aspects of life, but right now it feels shallow and needs to be improved upon.
Maybe consider adding some interaction between People dependent on something the player did.
Furthermore it would be nice to have different options to progress were the player has to choose from.
Good Job on finishing your first Gamjam!
Great choice of soundtrack.
Enjoyed the moment when walking to the last stage. It was a great view.
Some more verticallty in the movement would have been great and some faster movement too.
The soundtrack provides a feeling of rush, but the movement and gameplay lack behind.
Just speed the gameplay up to make it have the same feeling as the sound track.
Enjoyed playing it :D
Really enjoyed this game you made here. I spoilerd myself a bit by reading your answer to ilPrinnis comment. This though led me to have a goal for playing it. Open the door. You obviously tell this the player too, but I believe it is easy to think that reaching full hearts it the goal here and therefore overlooking the real goal, to get healthy and back into the world again (atleast that was my goal).
I enjoyed solving the puzzle of how to wake up each morning and end the day that my character can wake up better next morning. Big steps were for example finding out that I shouldn't cut myself. I did this often because I wanted to end the day with the most happiness, but by doing this I hurt myself in the long term.
I really enjoyed finally seeing my plant starting to live and growing each day :D
The music feels perfectly integrated into the game and is a good fit for it.
Great journey, nice art and just all in all a great game.
Controlling the arrow after it left your bow seems like a cool concept, but I wish you build more upon that concept.
I noticed some bugs which collision and getting stuck behind walls.
The colliders on enemies were to big, e.g when the player dies from contact damage but there is clearly space between the enemy and the player.
Visually the game looked good and fitted well together.
For a platformer the controls have to be on point. This was for the most time the case, the only change I'd like to see is the interaction with the grappling birds. Right now you are pulled toward the bird and make a jump when reaching him. How about instead of losing all horizontal momentum you can stop pressing space earlier and you keep all your speed and momentum and even gain a bit from being pulled in that direction. When holding space the current interaction with the jump is then used. What do you think about this change?
The atmosphere war great too, and I enjoyed the writing of the interactions between D and the NPCs. The end dialog came a bit to sudden for me. The NPCs talked about completing my goal but I never really knew what that was except to get to the top, a bit more information would have been nice on that part.
The upgrades didn't really worked for me, but maybe that was my error.
Great entry to the Jam
I enjoyed our concept reminded me somewhat of Magicka.
Props to you for including Settings menu with a lot of settings.
Maybe you could introduce some limitation on the casting of the spell so that spam spell casting isn't so powerful anymore and the emphasize is more on clever choosing of the combination of spells.
All in all I enjoyed this short experience, good job :D
Clean base gameloop. Challenges ramps up nicely.
It would have been nice to see some extra features to the baseloop. Cause right now it's get boring pretty fast, because nothing is really changing and no real thinking is needed from the player. For example maybe a powerup that increases the movement speed, or maybe some bad apples that take time of you instead of giving you some.
Thank you for you detailed feedback.
I like the concept too, but it feels flawed how I build it. Units push the Souls away in a circel around them, therefore it is hard to bring multiple Souls in the same direction. What do you think?
Souls gettimg stuck is indeed bad and poor visuals at the bottom should be improved too. In a perfect gane I could imagine clouds going opague when souls are under them
Really enjoyable game! It's visually polished and is just fun.
I the arrow keys are should have been different keys in my opinion (it looks great when the arrows come down but pressing the real physical arrow keys on my keyboard is rather uncomfortable, instead d, f and j keys would have been great a choice)
Levels/Stages would have been great.
The first 3 People are easy to do flawlessly. But afterwards the difficulty ramps up mercilessly. With the option to jump to a later point in the game you have less repetition which leads to more time enjoying the game.
Pressing all keys at once seems to work, you should fix this bug.
Real good game guys!
Small but enjoyable gameplay loop.
Sounds were a bit all over the place, some more cohesion would've been great.
That the demons behaved somewhat buggy with their speed gave the game some nice change.
I would love to see a bit more change of the environment. Moving clouds, different enemies so the player has to change their playstyle.
Right now I sit my ass in the best spot and spam my gun in one direction, which gets boring quite fast.
Artstyle and the animation are bloody gorgeus.
Controls feels similar to Celeste, which means they are mostly good.
The mechanic of different characters having different effects when dying were great. Sadly I was often left guessing which color meant what, maybe you find a different way to symbolize their mechanic (maybe that's just me).
Stuff I didn't like:
After messing up the first person I just want to restart the level quick and easy, without pressing shift through all the other people left. Give me a button to restart it instantly.
With the controls it was hard to make small movements which were in later level required, which made it frustrating to play these.
All in all an expressive entry to the Jam.





