Pretty good, though I do wish for more choices.
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Oh wow... This game was such a masterpiece <3
Character design and development was on point. The plot itself was also very original. The art was nice, and the music fit perfectly with each situation. The opening at the beginning of the game made it seem even more professional!
I played each route in the order of your recommended order, and it worked out quite well! And, in each route, I fell in love with the characters again and again. So far I've only played through the good endings of each bachelor (I got too attached to them) but I'll play through the bad endings once I stop being such a wimp lol.
Throughout the game many things happened to me emotionally. I laughed, I cried, I squealed like some crazy fangirl. What stayed the same though, was my interest. Usually, when I finish a route of an otome game, my excitement goes down a bit for some reason. That never happened with this game. Each character was written and fleshed out so well that I truly felt a connection with them. This also goes for Lucette and the various side characters.
Even though this is fictional, you've really made them seem like they could somehow come to life. Sure, there were witches, fairies, and all sorts of magical things, but the stories behind every character felt so...real. Personally, I felt that Lucette's initial feelings towards other people and her strained family relationship could be relatable to many people.
All in all, this game was beyond amazing. To anyone else reading this, you should really give this game a try! Your life isn't complete without it.
Oh god, this was good. I just...wow. It felt like a journey. I laughed at parts, I cried at parts, and I even fangirled at others. This game was just amazing.
NOW ONTO THE QUESTIONS (warning- possible spoilers):
- Which bachelor you like the most? and why?
This was a bit hard to choose, but my favorite would definitely be Reksa. I think it was mostly because of his character development. Witnessing him turn from an unapproachable jerk to reluctant friend and then to possessive boyfriend was really nice. It felt realistic and was paced perfectly.
- What makes you consider to play this game?
I saw this on my recommended list on this site, and after reading some of the reviews, I decided to try it out.
- Overall, what do you think about this visual novel? and what element stands out the most? (art? story? character?)
Um, I LOVED it??? :DDD It was just amazing. I felt a lot of things. Honestly, I haven't played through the bad endings yet because I just got attached to all of the bachelors.
Specifically though, I loved the characters and character development of all of the characters, not just the bachelors. It makes it feel like I could meet people like them in real life. I also liked how Tamara had her own story too, unlike the other heroines from other otome games. The overall plot I thought was very creative. This game also teaches valuable life lessons, like to strive for peace instead of war (some people really need to know this if you know what I mean).
- Do you have any question or constructive critiques? I will read all the comments and reply to them like I do in Lemmasoft.
How long did it take you to make this?
- Last but not least, if I make another visual novel, will you consider buying it? via patreon or kickstarter that is (since I need to eat, electricity, and such things when I make VNs xD)
Probably? It really depends on the cost. Also, I haven't played your other games, so I don't have a really good idea of your style yet.
AHHHHH I REALLY DON'T WANT TO PLAY THE BAD ENDINGS BUT AT THE SAME TIME I KIND WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS BUT I DON'T WANT TO SEE BAE SUFFER AHHHHHHHHHH what a dilemma
Overall: 5 stars
Ok, so I finished all the good endings for each character. I normally try to get all the endings, but...ugh, I've gotten attached to them and don't want to see them suffer. Anyways, I guess that's a success for you guys, since it's difficult to make people feel a connection with fictional characters. Kudos to you!
(Slight) spoilers under the cut
My heart broke a bit when Carver and Ben found out about the Heartbaked cake. I just...urgh...somehow, I grew to love them all. ...HELP ME.
The order I played it in was Radley, Carver, then Benjamin. So, when I got to Ben's ending, I felt really bad for Radley.
I thought that my favorite character would be Carver, since I usually go for the tsundere types, but it ended up being Ben. I guess it's because I could relate to his situation. He's sincere, no matter what, and I see him as someone who is emotionally strong. I really like the part in chapter 10 when he and Ginger were being "lovey-dovey." The part where he and Radley argued a bit after that was cute.
Overall, this game was really good. The flow was really nice. Usually, characters from these type of games just suddenly feel attraction, which doesn't normally happen in real life. I guess that's how I grew attached to these guys? ^^; I liked the concept of "accidentally falling in love," because, let's be honest, that's a tough scenario to actually write a full story about.
As for what you could improve on... Maybe elaborate more on how Radley fell in love with Ginger in the first place? Since it's implied that he's liked her for quite a while...
RATING: 10/10 1000% JUST LOVED IT <3
You know, I think the best part of this game was how relatable Emi's situation was, whether is was self-forced or brought on by someone else.
I liked how even though there were fun parts during the arcade "date," there was still a sense of foreboding of what was going to happen after. Kudos to the scriptwriter for that. Very nice.
Overall, this was an enjoyable game to play!
Hm, I guess it depends on how long the overall story is...?
There's this one otome game for IOS called "Ephemeral." I don't exactly remember how much each story costed, but it was very reasonable for such a good game. (I think all the main stories put together was about $15 or so...? And that's for 4 "romancable" characters.)
That being said, my absolute max would be $20, give or take. (Sorry, I would be able to pay more, but I'm kind of too young to have money of my own, so...ahaha...)
Ok, so right off the bat, I notice the art, and it's good. The text box fits well with the theme of the story and the background art. The idea of making the cursor a vial of blood also fits, especially because of the minimalist design of the text box. The sprites look very nice. I liked how the CGs were at multiple angles. It gives a more dynamic feel to the game. Overall, the art was better than the art from a lot of commercial otome games.
The music was also pretty good! It fit well with what was happening, and it wasn't boring. Kudos to your composer.
The story is very cute! I almost started squealing multiple times (especially the part when she met the hunter, 'cause hot damn). I like the plot idea. It makes me wonder what will happen if she falls for one o the other guys...hm... But I like how the story was also a bit serious. (like, what happens when they find out that she's a vampire!?)
Just a bit of constructive criticism, but I noticed a few errors in the script. Some spaces were missing in between the period of the last sentence and the beginning of the first sentence, and some words weren't capitalized when they were supposed to, but other than that, this game is perfect. Just don't forget to proofread it before you release the full game, I guess.
Btw, speaking of releasing the full game, do you have a set date for that? Also, are you planning to make this a commercial game?
JUST PLAYED THE DEMO AND IT WAS SO GOOD WAHHHHH
Anyways, I think I found a bug. After you exit the cave with the medic, two soldiers from the Core try to stop you. After you defeat the one on the left, it gives the message that "soldier __ is defeated" or something like that, but it pops up twice instead of once.
Hi, is there another place where I can download this? I really want to play it, but every time I download it and try to unzip it, it says "cannot open file '[file_name]' as archive," which leads me to believe that the file is corrupted. I've tried deleting and downloading multiple times, but the same thing keeps popping up.
Perhaps there's a download link on mediafire or something...? Thanks.
Urrghhh I really want to play this...
I really enjoyed playing this game! I thought the doctor looked a bit sketchy at first heh heh
I was a bit spooked when he remembered my choices, but that's actually really cool! Kudos to you on that.
Overall, it was a really great game! Thanks for publishing this.
I've played this, and it was really good. I felt really anxious, and was a bit frustrated when the man on the other side of the line couldn't be saved without the MC giving herself to him.
Though, it's pointless to expect who has mental issues to do anything sane, I guess.
Original plot, very realistic, loved the voices. Overall, I thought this game was pretty good!
Ok, so I just finished playing the demo, and my favorite character is LUCIFINE! :D
More like...Lucufine~ Amirite? 'Cause, HOT DAMN a friendly(ish) guy who can fight and who looks like that is DAMN FINE. GIMME
Also wondering why Beezle poisoned that cake...Not cool, man.
And I loved the choices in the game~ We finally get a protagonist that can be fully customized based on the choices you make, unlike some otoges (COUGH COUGH) where the choices don't really matter in the end.
Loved the humor, and the art was AMAZING. I really hope that this becomes a full game! °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°
God, I'm so hyped for the release~! <3
When I first saw Rumpel, I thought that he was going to be that stereotypical serious glasses guy (I love those types for some reason), but I love his actual personality even more lmaooooo he instantly became my favorite~
So I have a question on the contents of preordering:
Three additional SS stories are mentioned. Could you briefly explain what "SS stories" are? Is it some kind of otoge lingo? o.O?
(Sorry if this is a stupid question... I'm sure it's something obvious... ^^;)