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Haha 😁
Seems You didn't really like it, but didn't want to tell me that.
Its ok, I understand that what I made wont be loved by everyone.

The review you made was detailed with everything you did not like. Thanks for that. Its good to hear some advice from time to time.

Unfortunately, I cant do anything with intro, it is so necessary. Without it, it would be just a stupid square collecting CDs in a random place  for no reason.

Overall, Thanks for taking your time to write a long review about my game!

Thanks alot for playing and this nice comment <3

:D
thanks for playing
Maybe you r right, intro is long.

But i think it is necessary to build up to the game world, yk

That what I mean the term "It is preferred" means it is optional

I see that there is no rule that forbids The game you submit being be made before submission time

Does this mean If i have a game that fits the theme already, can I submit it?

Thanks for playing <3

Thanks alot for playing <3

Uhmm.. Are you facing a problem in downloading the game?.. or launching the exe?

if you have a screenshot, please send it

Thanks <3

You are right, it is indeed hard :(

Do you know an easy fix I can do to make movement easier?

I couldn't stop smiling when i watched someone else playing it.

Since u mentioned Undertale, have u noticed that "undertale" and "unrelated" are anagrams but of course that unrelated ;)

About the maze, i was not aware of this issue. I made sure collisions were smaller than the the tile square.

Finally, thanks alot for the support! It means alot

Psst... typos are intended.

Hi, thanks for playing!

You can win

you just need to know the strategy to win

Here is the way dont read it if you dont want spoilers

just hit the person in yellow, he has lowest health but highest attack

then heal alot

attack the one in the top, you will barely beat him

and just kill the king easily

Why u look like human worrier? :"

because you are a human who got corrupted with a demon

Thats all :"

Very nice game, the intro got me :D

I loved the graphics alot.

:" About the wild cards 

Iam sure since you put "Who even reads" wild card, you cant have this watch , i kept reading and reading :"

Behold one.. Hmm i guess it was the intro? Iam not sure :"

btw, I tried to jump on the ground of the city  where u start, i fell to the void
is this intentional?

Psst... I want to play the game from the screenshot too

Looks like a really polished game.

I will player it and give you detailed feedback ;)

Edit:

Nice game,

Amazing music, art and gameplay overall

I didnt think all this work can be finished alone in 9 days, its impressive

just change the main screen music. it is so disturbing. 

Its a bit buggy try to fix this bug:

- If you exit a level from where you enter (like falling below the one side collision planks)

- make the reset button reset the scene rather than just changing player position

Nice music

Nice looking game

Tho it really needs a tutorial, i feel very lost idk what does what and why and so

That why you need a toturial

Nice game, I like the shapes and the idea

bg music is good too

but consider removing the cheesey sfx when you finish a level it isnt fitting at all

Also you need a tutorial, i had no idea i could use enemies to jump. (it a bit buggy when i jump from a high place on them it doesnt work)

Really nice game

I love how the game looks. It has a very nice tutorial. nice music, nice work.

Loved multible uses of electric gun and the

It is really impressive for a game made in 9 days.

For a bit of feedback:

Enemies are quite abundant and hard to kill.

The elctro vest upgrade is OP.

in the last stage, there is a glitch, if you take a frozen alien while holding a frozen alien, you get infinitly many aliens. Thats how i won actually,  the level was a bit challenging for me :"

Anyway, amazing game for second game jam ever. Iam Impressed

Very nice game

I love the graphics, the music and the nice story.

Its very impressive you finished all of these beautiful assets within 9 days yourself

But consider adding more variety of enemies. Also, shooting things to interact with things isnt very logical :"

I shot by someone at another screen and interacted with him weirdly :"

Make interaction with a different button pls

Also, since player moves slowly, i used the hormones to move faster. It is an interesting idea if one mechanic had several uses.

Nice game,

I love the music , and the 3D models. They look awesome.

You should consider adding a tutorial (I didn't know what i was doing at first :")

Give the player simple tasks first instead of throwing him in the gameplay directly.

Uhm..

also the game is kinda short, consider making more levels (buildings) with more challenges.

Also, consider making the controls mouse-only (Keyboard isnt important in this game, you can look around and interact with mouse only)

I am really happy you like it!

Thanks alot for playing

Thanks for playing, it means alot <3

You are maybe right, The intro is too long (5 scenes). I thought "Maybe someone impatient will leave after 3 or 4 scenes."

So, I have put a skip button for these people and blocked skipping on important parts of dialogue and parts that are autodialogue.

there are only 2 unskipable scenes, is it alot?

About the maze,.. Hmm, I have tried it alot to make sure collisions are correct, can you tell me more?

Hey,
I replied to your comment about

You will find a link to a web version

Iam back

Since I cant upload for now

u can use this link

https://minachn.itch.io/temporaryunrelated-web

password: web

Great game

I have reviewed it intensively :"

Pros:

- I like the colors and the art (idk but it reminds me of chicken invaders)

- Animation is fluid

What is good is good, there isnt much to talk about but maybe consider making the game multiplayer.

Cons:

  - Toturial is not very clear.

    make toturial teach player the game play bit-by-by

    like making the simple tasks (move forward, shoot that rock, ..etc)
    OR

    making it much simpler so it is playable by anyone without one

    OR

    instead of making it a gaint pile of text, put simple images that are always visible to the player

  - No sound at all

    At first i thought it is muted but no, there is no sound at all, no music, no sfx no anything

    leaving it like this make the game feel dead

   -First task is verrry long

   - controls are abit confusing :'(

    A&D button are pretty much useless and make useless momentum in weird directions

   - the player doesnt get rewarded for completing tasks which seem of no goal (i understand the dyson thing but it doesnt feel satisfying)

    consider making ship upgrades or build new constructions near the base with these resources collected (it will become addictive)

I hope you liked it :D

Very creative play on words :D

Edit: there is a small glitch if u stand in between solar panels u can destroy two at the same time . Lets say I cheated :"

love visuals, music and sfx

Puzzles weren't very hard but weren't very easy too

Would have loved more variety in robots (maybe others that focus on things other than mobility)

Uhhhmmm.. what else, oh, you should work on the basic platformer :" (I am sure you spent most of the time on game mechanic but you need to work on the basics too)

Here are some tips for a nice guy i found

Nice game

I like the minimalistic design of the game.

I just hope there was music or sfx to make the game feel more alive

also, this video contians some tips

the auto dialogue part is intended :D

what u missed was not important at all. (it was garbage talkinh)

Iam really happy you liked it, thanks for this amazing longy review! It made my day

Oh right the typos, you are correct about that part its to indicate corruption

I was going to make it clear in future if i added more content

I really like it

the music, graphics,. everything

what i  dont like is that there is no win/lose states which is a must for most games (not counting clicker games)

Hey

nice game!

the only problem is that it is not balanced

You see

All buildings produce money only building 1&2 produce green

which makes building 4 pretty much useless (no reason to put it)

What I did was:

put building 3 to save for building 1

after that replace bit by bit building 3 with 1

finally spam building 2 as much as possible in the time limit

i cant upgrade my defenses (add more too)

is that a bug or intended?

:D

I have a problem

Your wildcard is "No text" so you need to teach me how to play with symbols or drawings

Currently, Iam stuck and dont know what does what.

Lets talk about things I like

i like graphics, and music they are nice. its impressive as first game jam actually

With trail and error, i figured basic mechanics myself

Now, one thing you should really add is the ability to remove building

holding left click sounds so weird to make a building. (consider making it something easier e.g. clicking to make menu appear then click again to select)

also when I try to click the icon in the corner and click X to close it , it builds instead of closing which is annoying especially when i cant remove what i put (Iam sure its a simple bug, its ok iam not saying my game doesnt have bugs ** Actually, I know all the bugs in my game but didnt have time to fix it so instead i hid it Shhhhh! Dont tell anyone **)

Nice job

I like the art of the game and sfx !

My only problem with it is that it is so short for a clicker game

Also, i didnt understand why i needed 5 green points :"

can u make a vid too?
i wonder about some stuff

Mine here : https://minachn.itch.io/unrelated