I say it again here, thank you for your feedback!
I am really happy that your favorite character is the protagonist, I was afraid that the player would not be able to shape her personality enough to relate to her.
I understand your opinion on Matt ^^ I hope you'll like him more in the full game as he is the only romanceable character ><
I know I need to work on the typos and spelling mistakes, I hope I'll get enough help when I'll finish the script.
I am really happy that you wanted to know more :p I can't wait to know your opinion on the full game when it will be released ^^
I'll break the sentences of the text when there is a lot, like you said it can be overwhelming to have so many sentence at once.
Again thank you for your feedback :D