I like it! It does a really well in accentuating the eroticism of the situation, I'm very pleased with the way it's come together. It's also inspired me to make the first section flow a little bit better, so I'll do some minor edits at some point in the near future. Excellent work!
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Stage 2-3 is complete! Let me know what changes you'd like to make!
I'm going off of the 1-6 chart that Annon posted earlier, by the way, in case anyone is wondering
Sure! I was kind of thinking that somewhere along the line her desk could do double duty as a vanity/work space, but we can cross that bridge when we come to it.
Also, I was planning on writing this next sequence under the assumption that she won't actually notice the changes itself, but she will notice the changes in her day to day life because of them. For example, her breasts being strangely needy and sensitive recently, or the leering gazes of boys as they eye her chest in passing, something that likely hadn't happened before. If people have any input as to whether or not this seems like a good idea, it'd be much appreciated. I'm just kinda working off the cuff right now to see what fits and what doesn't.
Excellent! I'll get started on the next few stages then. I'm not sure how wordy they'll be yet, but I'll just write as much as I think is appropriate, and I can alter it after the fact, pending approval from everyone!
I meant 1 to 2. I can tone down the level of expansion though, that wouldn't be very difficult at all. I was going to just have a second round of more pronounced breast growth when we got to that point. The change was meant to be from a B cup to a D or a DD, and then for 6 it would likely be DD to a G, but I can tone it down a bit more if that's what's preferred!
I'd be happy to write all the way from 1 to 10 if you wanted me too. I can't make any promises for timelines, as I'm moving apartments pretty soon, but I'm more than willing to pitch in for the cause.
Sure! I was debating whether or not to write in some dialogue for her since I wasn't super sure how it would be formatted in the context of the game. If internal dialogue is something you're interested in doing, though, I'm more than happy. It'd make the piece a little more punchy, I think.
I suppose that sort of depends on whether or not people want to focus more on the bimbofication, or the end result. Shorter, more poignant pieces would help the pacing of the game. Since text games are wordy by nature, people may prefer a little more brevity here. Are we feeling longer, or shorter scenes?
I wrote a thing earlier, small bimbofication scene for Twilight to transition from base form to stage 1 bimbo. It's pretty heavy on the lewd, and the formatting definitely needs to be changed to make it viable for the game, but let me know what you guys think. It's just a rough draft right now anyways, pieces can be changed without too much issue at all. I wrote it to be kind of ambiguous so that it can be inserted into the story while also not necessarily impacting the central narrative.
I just finished my rough draft of the first bimbofication scene on a google doc, do you have an email or something I can send it to you with? Just looking to see if what I have here fits the bill for the world everyone's building before I start up on numbers 2 through 5.
I'd love to take up the mantle of writing some bimbofication scenes. If someone can give me a rough timeline of how 'bimboed' each step of the process makes the girls, I can write the transformation process. Also, I'd be happy to write some other characters if it's needed, though I've only seen up the end of season three. Any characters introduced thereafter are a little unfamiliar to me, I'm afraid, but everyone else is fair game! Which of the girls is highly sought after?