Good starting point. What about working a bit on the lights? Some very dark parts, lights that draw the player where you want them (He, he!). Some cobwebs? Strange dragging stains on the pavement? Free some walls for foreign words written in blood? Whatever, have fun!
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If you used the Unity engine you can make a build of your game, then, in the console (top right corner) pull down the menu and select "open Editor Log". Scroll down to the section "Complete build size" and you can see how much space every one of your assets takes in your game. You can then optimize the biggest ones.
I've played video games since the early '80 (starting with "Pong" and "Pack Man") but it took "Skyrim", "Dragon Age Origins", "Mass Effect 1-3" and "The Witcher 1-3" to really open my eyes. After I retired 7 years ago I decided to learn how to make video games (thank you Youtube and Udemy!). Storytelling and Landscaping are my favourite parts of development. I worked as a historian(Middle Ages) /archivist/ teacher and had no knowledge whatsoever of programming, so I started with Game Maker 8.0 and then with RPG Maker Ace. Now I'm learning Unity and I'm very happy with my hobby. And yes, English is not my mother tongue. I wish you all many happy hours with game development!
If you are looking for a game where the story is important, you have to make decisions with consequences and you have multiple ends, check out these two:
https://criacuervos.itch.io/moonstone-deep
https://criacuervos.itch.io/benjamin-of-blackstone-edge
https://criacuervos.itch.io/halloween-shooter
This is a short shooter for Android, just to pass the time if you are waiting for the bus. In time I'll add more mobile games to this page, for now only this one (for android!).
"it ALL turns out to be a compleat bag of garbage" doesn't help anyone. Why not take your time and tell the developer(s) in the comment section what exactly didn't work? This would help a lot and the developer could improve his game. I test my games as much as I can, but there are always bugs that escape my view. I'm grateful if players point them out for me in the comment section so that I can eliminate them. As a player, you can do a lot to help us improve our games!
If your audience is young maybe this game could interest you https://criacuervos.itch.io/the-mystery-of-the-blood-fountains