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I really like the story and art and while I've never actually played this kind of genre, it was a new experience for me. 

However, breaking the 4th wall (such as telling you you did a good job solving a puzzle), also broke the immersion of the story a little bit. It would be great if the transition between story and gameplay was more subtle. Also, some of the items in the picture were really hard to see, maybe changing the contrast would help a little.

In conclusion, the game does have potential to be an interesting novel, if the transitions would be tweaked a little.

I just played it and I really enjoyed it^^ It caught my attention because of the steampunk feeling. Seeing the dark atmosphere of the maps I guessed it would be a darker story, but I was still a little surprised how dark XD

Anyway, the art is great and the story is interesting, too. Collecting the iron went fast, so it couldn't get too repetetive. The twist with the magic was great. I never expected it XD
Though I think the battle mechanic could be a little more polished. I like it that you have to think carefully about what you do next, but it feels a little underwhelming right now.

In conclusion, once it's a little more polished, I'd love to play it again^^ The story got me hooked XD

It's a really nice intro and the art is just gorgeous! I'd love to make maps like these in the future^^
Though unfortunately I wasn't able to come far. After getting stranded, the player just kept spinning the entire time. I couldn't move at all. And it seemed like the guy who had joined your party in the flashback was still following you, despite being somewhere else. 

Anyway, the art is great and I would love to see more of it^^

I'd love to collaborate with you^^ Here's my discord account if you want to talk more about it. -> @BlackRoseMii#7662

I played it for quite a while now, but never got past the second boulder puzzle in the dungeon ^^°
Anyway, the story and the characters are pretty interesting and I love it when games give you romance options (*cough* Tyran). I'd be happy if the game would be continued.

It's a shame that it's only default art right now, but I'm sure with some custom made graphics, it would be much better. Sometimes, the music felt a little too much though. Not every location needs a grand soundtrack with lyrics.

In conclusion, I think it's a very nice story you should continue^^

I really love the art and I've been looking forward to play it since I first saw it. The art is cute and has its own charme and I'm sure with some polish it will look even better. I love that you've made all the maps yourself. It must been a lot of work XD
I'm very interested in the story and it has definitely potential to become a big one^^ The game might be short, but I think it shows just enough story to make the player interested without explaining too much.
I really love steampunk games in general and I'm looking forward to how the story will continue^^

I have to agree that the art is pretty and unique, though the pattern can strain the eyes a bit if you look at it for too long. I was also missing the music a bit. I wasn't really able to tell what kind a feeling a scene should have without it.  

Though with the right story and some more polish, I'm sure this game can become pretty good. I'd love to see more of it^^

The game seems interesting and the maps look good, too, but I've run into several problems leading to game breaking bugs. Such as the box with the teddy at the end of the floating map. I get stuck there as soon as I interact with it. And the last door. When entering it after the door before that, there is no collision at all and it carries over to the other maps as soon as you leave, making any interaction impossible.

I would have loved to see more of it, so I hope you'll be able to fix those bugs after the contest.

I've played through it and I like it^^
The art is really pretty and I can see that you've put a lot of effort into it. Not just the portraits, but also the little cutscene in the train. The maps are great and interesting, too. I'm a big fan of steampunk XD

Unfortunately, while it's an interesting idea, there isn't much story. You don't find out a lot about the characters or the world. Like, why is she mute? Where are her parents? How come she can see and talk to the horseman? (Interesting idea btw to add the horseman into this story. How do they fit?) And what's the difference between normal humans and ones with animal ears?
Also, the way it ended felt a little weird. It would have been great to end it on a cliffhanger and while I'm sure the time limit was a problem, the last scene could have been extended just a little to create a cliffhanger. 

In conclusion, I really love the art and the world. The story seems promising, though it was a little short. I'd love to see more of this game^^

I wasn't really sure what to think about it first, but I'm glad I played it^^
The music is great and the art is really cute^^ The gameplay is pretty solid, too.
It's a little too short for my tastes and a little more backstory would be nice, but you guys probably focused on presentation more.
Anyway, I would love to see more of this game and I'm pretty sure you'll come far with it^^ I can definitely see how that could become the next indie hit^^

Thanks for the feedback^^. I didn't know the issue with the limited ingredients would be so much of a problem. I had written down a tip in the description before, but it seems like it's not enough yet. I'll specify it better now.

I really love this game. The art is gorgeous and I didn't expect to find some zombies chasing me XD

Most of the puzzles were easy to understand and didn't take much time to figure them out either.
I don't think I have something that greatly bothered me, though of course it could use some polish. 

In conlusion, if you ever made this into a full game, I'd definitely play it. (And maybe translate it to other languages as well, I'm sure my mom would totally want to play this XD)