I like the mix and the sound. I can't complain about the bass. :) A really different part (with more variation) could make this a bit more spunky. But still great work!
yes this bass sound is awesome! :] this gives off a cold vibe and seems fitting for a city setting. Adding a lower energy section, without the bass, might create some anticipation for the bass when it comes back in. Maybe you can use a highpass filter for that? It is still a cool track! I like it <3
Really spooky! Cold and liveless as the skyscrapers are! Gives a nice mood, I could imagine to reduce the volume for the "sirens" a bit and maybe add a few more different or changing elements to it. Or modify the sound of the sirens slowly over time to generate some change. This is a really nice soundscape!
this is like a roller coaster theme and fits quite nice to a train :D It has quite a jazzy feeling, maybe a bit more structure or at some parts less instruments could sound richer. As it seems a bit crowded at times. But it still vibes well!
nice job in LMMS! <3 The bass sound is great and the harmony flows quite nicely! For me some noises seem to stick out a bit too much, other than that it is really enjoyable!
with lyrics! That's so nice. You added quite some effort. Did you "Master" it? You can try to compress your voice or the guitar or both. I would have expected some sort of B-part but that's fine just how it is :) Great work!
Oh I like the instrument sounds! :D It has a nice vibe and gives off an adventure, explorer feeling. Only thing I can critize: at some parts the lead instrument seems to be a bit too loud (can be my ears too) ;)
Like the wave sounds and the whole mystic touch. This track reminds me of Seiken densetsu at times. really nice mix and very versatile. Really nicely done.
the bass reminds me of hell march (C&C). Really like the bass line. The flute and the drums are a nice contrast to the bass. The bass has this dirt like texture to me and the flute represents air/lightness pretty good. I really enjoyed it :)
You are welcome! Hmm you could try to change the mid-lows or try some sort of bathtub EQ. I usually look at the spectrum and try to add some sort of seperation between the frequency bands. But I am no expert either. We are here to help each other and improve upon our feedback :)
Really like the sidechained drone sound and when the guitar comes in! Nice feeling. The sounds could improve a little by adding a bit of variation to them. Otherwise it is a great track!
Oh this is nice, quite sounds like a peaceful village with some silly people in it. :) I like the sound variation you put in, but the drums seem a bit repetitive and could benefit from some variation.
I like the dusty vibe this gives off and how the drums give it a nice drive. You could try to add some variation to it by changing the sound of the melody instrument in the second half. And maybe some fills for the drums. Great job!
Nice sounding track! The bass seems a bit too prominent (maybe)? Maybe a B-section could give it a bit more variation. Other than that it is quite relaxing and fun to listen to. :]
chiptune always gets me! :D I like the arps and the mystic feeling of the song. I think it is also not too overcrowded and has a good transperancy to it. Maybe some transitions could be a bit smoother, but the whole track is lovely and gives a hopeful vibe at the end.
This has a nice touch, with the bass and the pads! The melody is also quite catchy and the area feeling you described really transfers. Only thing I would change is the mix. Some parts seem a bit crowded to me and could be cleared up with some eq maybe? Nice work! :)
It seems the drums could be a bit louder or sidechained? And I really like the transistion effect you made from the low to the high energy part and back to the low part! The overall sound is nice and energetic (maybe a bit more punch). The image is quite fitting to the track, it reminds me of some futuristic setting. Well done!
Wow this is another level :O The melody in developement B seems to go a bit under or lost. I find it a bit "muffled" or unclear at times, but beside that, it is really beautifully made. And the singing adds a nice touch to it! You can hear that you poured in quite some work here. :)
The drums could use a bit more variation at times, but they do sound nice! The lead sound, in my opinion is a bit loud. Some sounds could have some variation (dynamic or timbre change) maybe?
I like the variations you made (B-parts) and the sounds/instruments are cool! Overall it's a lovely piece <3
