The story gave me a Bleach Anime vibe. Especially, the giant chopping knife sword and the whole spirit thing. The grammar is understandable but needs some work. The art needs to be more consistent. There are pixelated ACE sprites sitting next to non-pixelated MV ones.
I personally hate quick-time combat, especially, in a game that uses a turn-based system. However, if need-be, I can usually plow my way through it. I made it to the crying lady and one-shot her with the special attack.
I can see that a lot of work had gone into Mei, herself. She has quite a few custom animation and face sets. I love that NPCs react to the spirit and throw funny comments.
A bit more polish and you might get yourself a game.