Great game concept. I loved the implementation for the theme here. the most unique concept so far. The writing and dialog is very well written.
The only Issue I can point out is that the inputs or commands can be unclear or unresponsive at times.
Overall the game is fantastic, and I would love to see this made into a full experience.
BTW if you have the time could you give our entry a try: https://itch.io/jam/gmtk-2019/rate/463041