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A jam submission

Except Me: The Diary of HellView game page

Submitted by Capsule Games — 1 day, 27 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Story#2232.7692.769
Music#3013.0773.077
Fun#4272.8462.846
Aesthetics#5422.6922.692
Sound#5532.0002.000
Mechanics#5702.3852.385
Theme#6292.2312.231

Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How many people worked on this game total?
Just me

Did you use any existing assets? If so, list them below.
Sprites and Background from CraftPix under the public domain license.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Congrats on the submission! It's a little rough around the edges but fun overall and has an interesting story! I see lots of potential here.

Developer

Thank you :)

Submitted(+1)

Nice!  Others have pointed out the resolution issues, but still pretty good.  Lots of good story ideas - keep developing them :)

Developer

Thanks for your valuable feedback ::)

Submitted(+1)

Well done on your game, pal! I've rated it. Would you mind checking out my game and leaving a rating? Let's exchange feedback!

Developer

Thanks and certainly I’ll try to play your game :)

Submitted(+1)

Set your screen size settings for your itch page a bit bigger, it's cutting off the sides. 
For example I build for 960x600 (sits in a web page nicely), and set my itch page to 1000x660, to get the full game plus unity border in.
Also,.. I broke your game by going left at the start and falling forever, might need something to either stop me going that way, or killing me off if I do (and in platform games, I'm always going to try going left at the start, as sometimes people hide an easter egg there, for classic game reasons :P).
Actually game wise, controls and mechanics felt good. Nice and speedy in general. Good job.

Developer

Thanks a lot :) But I hope during jam time I can’t change anything related to the game. And sometimes I give a lot of useless ways in my game so that players would be confused for their excitement about what’s left there. but yep I did a mistake in that case. btw Roger that!)

Submitted(+1)

you can make some bug fixes, and the display change to your itch page you certainly can do :)

Submitted(+1)

Awesome music. One of the jump sound effects had this click at the end that bothered me just a little. I liked the cutscene at the beginning.
Overall, fun game, nice work!

Developer

Thanks!)

Submitted(+1)

I liked your art, that intro bit was fun! Just a couple notes I have: The delay on the shooting feels odd. And I think if the character moved a little faster jumping would feel a bit better.

Good job though!

Developer

Thanks for your feedback. Actually, I used the IEnumerator type for delayed shooting in Unity. Hopefully, That is the reason for that error.

Submitted(+1)

Love the story, the game itself is fun, it just needs polish and I think that will come with more practice.
You should be proud of the game.

Developer

Thanks M8)

Submitted(+1)

The game is fun though the shooting delay feels weird. No worries though since I'm sure you can and will be able to do better. Good job!

Developer

Thanks :)

Submitted(+1)

the image is somewhat cropped, the movement is a little hard especially when jumping.

resetting the whole level when falling into spikes felt a little hard.

kudos for adding ladders tho

Developer

Thanks for your valuable feedback. Sorry for my mistakes :(

Submitted(+1)

Sadly the UI wasn't really visible all the time. But I loved the intensity of the Goblins / Orcs coming at me swinging :D

If you have the time, can you play and rate my game, too?

Developer (1 edit)

Thanks 8)