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No, you are simply wrong, the story is good and the art is good. See how stupid that sounds? Do you think the creador doesn't put effort in the vn? Mate, i know that's just your opinion, but you can keep it for yourself. If you feel like it's your tea, then I'm glad for you, but if you don't like it, just leave and go play another vn, there's no need to compare it to another vn you read or harass an artist's work.
they dont have to " fix " anything their art style is amazing and better then dawn chorus in MY opinion. dawn chorus is a good one but not my favourite. but i dont go to dawn chorus and say " this isint as good as this one that isint ment to be the same at all! " no. we like what we like and leave shit alone. both are good and you dont need to be an asshole because you want them to change everything for your liking. there is no " fixing whats wrong " to be done. " BUT MY OPINION IS MORE IMPORTANT " apparently go off
people like slimmer appearances and more muscular or chubby. just because they arent the body type you want and find attractive. that doesint mean you can shame people for what they like " its sad that its pulled more then dawn this looks cringe " its disgusting you think you can degrade people and something just because YOU dont like it. i dont like dawn chorus much. if you are more into body shaming more diverse body types then fucking leave. we dont fuck with people like you. you cant backpeddle like " its just my opinion " and go on about how you hate it 3 seconds before. no. fuck off. i HIGHLY doubt youve even played it besides seeing the reviews and huffing going into the comments to write up a storm about how awful it is from the 3 pictures you saw without knowing shit about a single character or story. blind ego rage right there. i read dawn chorus. THEN i decided i didnt like it. i didnt just look at it and go " i hate it im going to leave a nasty comment to hurt the creators feelings that will show them for adding diversity in characters and not appealing to me! "
It kind of baffles me how you think that telling someone what they made is 'cringe' and that it would look better in another style isn't an offensive statement. Even if it's 'just your opinion', it's pretty terrible to tell anyone something like that.
It's like if you walked up to a lady and said "Your baby is really ugly, so you should try making a new one with someone so maybe it'll look like that cute baby over there. That's just my opinion though." See how terrible that sounds? x3
Just have more tact when expressing your opinions next time, or try to be constructive. Constructive criticism or feedback is just fine in most cases (unless folks just don't want that). Or better yet, stick with the saying "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all."