No, you are simply wrong, the story is good and the art is good. See how stupid that sounds? Do you think the creador doesn't put effort in the vn? Mate, i know that's just your opinion, but you can keep it for yourself. If you feel like it's your tea, then I'm glad for you, but if you don't like it, just leave and go play another vn, there's no need to compare it to another vn you read or harass an artist's work.