I liked the feeling of helplessness I got from playing this game and not having real choices - but man I'm curious about the characters I didn't get to talk to!

Ahh, man, I wish you could have seen my face when MC mentions about the first girl looking 'witchy' and then recalls her name is Tabitha! It's a funny coincidence, but there's actually a witch named Tabitha in the game my team made for the same jam :D

Anyways, I thought it was a pretty cool concept!

It's a shame that you didn't get a chance to add music and SFX, but jams are always one big rush (at least they feel that way for me, while still being a blast!) I'm interested to see how the rest of the story plays out when you get the opportunity to work on the rest of the content you wanted to include :3

SPOILERS

I know the log line mentions losing control, but I was still surprised when it happened, haha.

(Madeleine) 

The idea of presenting where the player has no real agency is interesting! There's another game in this jam titled Melanie which explores a similar concept.

I'd love to see where you take this! Some music and sound effects would really help to bring your writing to life.