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Likes-  cohesive art, font, music/SFX and UI choices
-  lovely art and font
-  nice voice acting
-  story and writing are great and fit in well with the game's vibe
Dislikes-  audio balance is off. Even with BGM 50% and Voice 100%, voices are overpowered by BGM
Extra nitpick-  a few typos/inconsistency with punctuation (em-dash vs hyphen) and spelling ("favour" vs the other Americanized words)
-  a few odd diction/punctuation choices/mistakes
-  speaking indicators aren't conventional or more obvious (current ver: having a name vs no name. usual: quotation marks or italics) fortunately, the line between thought and narration is so blurred that it doesn't feel off
-  would love to have heard Ace's "no" in his path voiced out
Extra love-  opening cutscene looks gorgeous
-  interesting way to incorporate CGs without making it CG

Thanks for the feedback!