I would like to collaborate with you on your next projects.
I'm a game writer for various indie studios , and always on the lookout for new challengers.
My role as a writer is to formulate character / narrative driven documents , gaming and character backstories , as well as implementing puzzles and side quests.
I too have completed my first kinetic VN - Axiom Alternative. Available for purchase on STEAM, and very soon will be working on another VN project with a different studio, and Axiom Alternative 2 is currently available on STEAM. I'm up for any challenge, and would like the opportunity to show your studio what writing material I can bring to the table.
I'm currently working on a document for a psychological, horror type game. Maybe we could collab on future gaming projects.
I wish it was longer and there was more to it but it was a good short game and i enjoyed it. Ending was surprising. If you can check my playthrough and maybe subscribe it'd mean so much, Have a good day :)
So like, if you are a big horror junkie like me just know before going in you most likely won't get much out of this. The horror here is more ambiance than anything. Solid title for newbies to horror just not good for those who have a bit more experience under their belt
Cool little horror experience. Definitely this poor kid's worst nightmare.. Ending was a bit abrupt, would have liked to see more. Otherwise, awesome job~
Good game!, There was a couple of scary and unnerving moments but they were not super repetitive and overdone which is a mistake a lot of these games make.
I felt like the environment could have used a little more detail and like some of the background noises were a little too loud but those are not huge details to worry about.
Yo! I think I have already found a critical game-breaking bug in your game.
The Screen Resolution is SCREWED UP! Only the image of the menu screen with your name on it! I've seen Youtubers playing this game and somehow were able to access the game without any interruption...
Kinda annoying but I will wait patiently for the next update.
EDIT: I read some comments and I might not be the only one with this issue, I just hope the screen resolution gets fixed in the future!
I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. The suspense had me hooked I kept expecting something to creep up from behind and attack me. Excellent work my dude this game gave me chills.
Very nice work. I liked the premise you created. We can pretty much all relate to the experience of waking up at night and being afraid of what might be lurking right outside our bedroom door. The creepy thing about being a young kid is that at such hours of the night, the mind can play tricks on you. Every sound becomes magnified, every creak in the night becomes a monster in our minds. My biggest note would be to consider how the ending is delivered. The game kind of ends abruptly, and for me it left me confused about how to feel. I do feel bad for the protagonist, but because it's a short game, it's hard to feel too bad because there isn't enough time to get emotionally invested in him before the ending is revealed. You've got the outlines of a good story here that just needs some more fine tuning to become something awesome. Please keep making content and keep up the good work!
Thank YOU. Always be encouraged; you developed this game and you have great potential. I hope years from now you'll still be developing games and that each one will be better than the last. Hit me up with your future projects! Would love to play them. Thanks again man!
I am a stickler for detail and in this game, the texturing was very much to my liking, especially given the relative small footprint of the game itself. An unexpected hallway leads to an eventual horror ending. Short but sweet game. I liked it and hope many will support Sean173 in this and future endeavors.
Um, I'm having problems with different screen resolutions with other people so it will work for people that have a screen resolution like same as mine but if you have different than mine it may not work because the buttons will be all around the place but I'm still trying to figure it out. Sorry!
This was very spooky, and just hit me with how little you see in front of you! I was waiting for a jump scare but never got one! Good job on keeping me on my toes!
not a bad game imma be honest, but would be better to have at least a jumpscare or something to give us more scared or something...keep up the good work!
This was a cool little game.. I was a little confused about what the whole dream sequences represented. There's a few creepy moments but not really any scares.. well, it made me jump once so I guess maybe one if you jump easy like me. But for a 5 minute game I would recommend giving it a shot. Keep up the good work!
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Hi there,,
I would like to collaborate with you on your next projects.
I'm a game writer for various indie studios , and always on the lookout for new challengers.
My role as a writer is to formulate character / narrative driven documents , gaming and character backstories , as well as implementing puzzles and side quests.
I too have completed my first kinetic VN - Axiom Alternative. Available for purchase on STEAM, and very soon will be working on another VN project with a different studio, and Axiom Alternative 2 is currently available on STEAM. I'm up for any challenge, and would like the opportunity to show your studio what writing material I can bring to the table.
I'm currently working on a document for a psychological, horror type game. Maybe we could collab on future gaming projects.
Any questions, feel free to ask.
Regards,
Redewaan
This was really cool, and the ending was a surprise!!! I do wish there was more to interact with than doors, but the ambience was amazing!!!!
Here is my play through, if anyone is interested!!!
Game was funny and a bit spooky too!
super duper mega geil
I have some questions, but didn't mind playing. Can't wait to see more!
That Was So Dark...
Help me reach 1000 SUBS!loved it
This is a really cool short game.
Subscribe please.Really creepy game! I like this kind of thing! Good work!
I had these type of Nightmares too when I was a child...
Help my Youtube reach 1000 SUBS!So like, if you are a big horror junkie like me just know before going in you most likely won't get much out of this. The horror here is more ambiance than anything. Solid title for newbies to horror just not good for those who have a bit more experience under their belt
Cool little horror experience. Definitely this poor kid's worst nightmare.. Ending was a bit abrupt, would have liked to see more. Otherwise, awesome job~
I was so scared and its hard to scare me i mean so hard to scare me so good game and i will follow you
Good game!, There was a couple of scary and unnerving moments but they were not super repetitive and overdone which is a mistake a lot of these games make.
I felt like the environment could have used a little more detail and like some of the background noises were a little too loud but those are not huge details to worry about.
Wish your game lots of success!
Yo! I think I have already found a critical game-breaking bug in your game.
The Screen Resolution is SCREWED UP! Only the image of the menu screen with your name on it! I've seen Youtubers playing this game and somehow were able to access the game without any interruption...
Kinda annoying but I will wait patiently for the next update.
EDIT: I read some comments and I might not be the only one with this issue, I just hope the screen resolution gets fixed in the future!
Hi there, I’m so sorry for this bug. I’m working on it. I have a question, were you able to see the play and quit button at all in the game?
no
Sorry, there wasn't anything there my friend.
Too short, and not scary at all. Do yourself a favor, and don't install it.
Nice game
Useless. Doesn't start at all.
Try to install DirectX.
And don't say "Useless" to a game when you haven't even played. That is rude.
I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. The suspense had me hooked I kept expecting something to creep up from behind and attack me. Excellent work my dude this game gave me chills.
thanks for playing! loved your gameplay
Omg, thank you so much for the feedback. I'll try way better next time!
Thank YOU. Always be encouraged; you developed this game and you have great potential. I hope years from now you'll still be developing games and that each one will be better than the last. Hit me up with your future projects! Would love to play them. Thanks again man!
short but nice i was expecting some big jumpscare lol
check out my vid if you want :)
Had a nice creepy atmosphere that had me tensed up the whole time and that was certainly an... interesting way to end a horror game. :)
Nice game! ✌✌✌✌✌
Thanks for watching!
Help me reach 1000 SUBS!
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I am a stickler for detail and in this game, the texturing was very much to my liking, especially given the relative small footprint of the game itself. An unexpected hallway leads to an eventual horror ending. Short but sweet game. I liked it and hope many will support Sean173 in this and future endeavors.Who else is waiting for cory to play this game too..
I am lol
also can you tell me how to press start cause I'm literally clicking every button
Um, I'm having problems with different screen resolutions with other people so it will work for people that have a screen resolution like same as mine but if you have different than mine it may not work because the buttons will be all around the place but I'm still trying to figure it out. Sorry!
oh that's fine I was just concerned on how I was gonna play it but its fine just take your time :)
I can make a update where if you can just press a button it'll start the game but I have to also do some other bug fixes :D
Awesome game Loved it It is in my 3 horror games video check it out
Cute little game. The texturing is fine.
Great game! Could be a bit longer but other than that it was amazing
Wonderful Game! Ill be sure to play the other.
Thanks for watching and subscribe to my channel!
I wanna reach 1000 SUBS!
This was very spooky, and just hit me with how little you see in front of you! I was waiting for a jump scare but never got one! Good job on keeping me on my toes!
not a bad game imma be honest, but would be better to have at least a jumpscare or something to give us more scared or something...keep up the good work!
trash game, there is no horror at all. Really disappointed just wasted my internet. (overrated)
lets see u do better
This was a cool little game.. I was a little confused about what the whole dream sequences represented. There's a few creepy moments but not really any scares.. well, it made me jump once so I guess maybe one if you jump easy like me. But for a 5 minute game I would recommend giving it a shot. Keep up the good work!