I'd really like some honest, if harsh criticism. Everyone on here it too nice-- anyone feel free to play it, or comment on it.
https://spaghetti-software.itch.io/spin-the-wind
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I'll start with the positive stuff- I think the core idea is great. The settings and story you put the player in are more original than most gmes I've seen here, including my own.
I feel like the presentation matters a lot here, and that's the main drawback for me. You present the story in pop up windows which aren't very engaging to the player, and the destruction levels could use better sound design. Plus the controls of the tornado felt a little counterintuitive and I couldn't figure out how the boost works.
Overall there is a lot of potential with the idea, just needs some polish.
The game's pretty fun, but the UI is pretty jarring, I can't really tell what I'm looking at. It doesn't help that the buttons are mostly transparent on top of a 3D background. The text is really small on screen, and doesn't have an outline, and the game could benefit a lot from more sound effects. Also, you're waaay too zoomed in by default, please change that.