Thank you so much for your detailed feedback! It will help us a ton to improve the game and the story.
The interactions are indeed written by a female person :) Though they are solely based on real interactions between a male dog owner and his dog. But I am interested what is the reason you saw it like that :)
You are right about the mini game, we didn't have enough time to implement more complex mechanics, so right now it is a bit random.
Regarding the emotions of the protagonist — it was the initial idea to make him not to describe his emotions, so that the player could deside for themselves what to think of various situations and concepts that they face. But perhaps it hasn't worked out the way I planned!
As we ran out of time to do some polishing and proofreading, there might be even more mistakes than you have pointed out, sorry about that! I am grateful for your help with these. I would certainly spend some time on fixing it after the jam ends.