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Hey, I played it again. Here are the extracts that gave you away :P
"Jesse looks content: yep, some ears have been scratched.

I gently help her to get to bed...

I am sitting on my bed. Jesse already snores softly.

Jesse woofs in her sleep: I hope she is having some sweet dreams about a meatloaf. Or two.

Good night, little bun."

The way they are phrased - it's kind of obvious it is written by a woman. Whereas the character is a male. 

I don't have a problem with it. You can leave it as it is. Just sharing my observation.

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I see where you are coming from, though among my friends and acquaintances it is quite typical to call a dog "a little bun", regardless of the gender of the person speaking. It could also depend on the dog, I believe :) You may speak differently to a toy poodle (this is the case for this story) and a German shepherd, for instance.

I'm not a dog owner so I'm probably wrong about that.