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A jam submission

Sweet Penny Breath (R18+)View game page

Vampire Jam 2019 Entry
Submitted by Kathy_E_J (@Kathy_E_J) — 18 hours, 15 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Hot#53.6473.647
Volatile#92.8242.824
Overall#122.9122.912
Cold#142.2942.294
Dark#152.8822.882

Ranked from 17 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

(+1)

I enjoyed this story very much, the expanding content was a nice addition with this story. I also expected a totally different kind of story, but it ended so sweet. I guess it's in the name, I just didn't expect it to be so lovely haha. And great wordplay with the 'penny breath' I really liked that invention. :)

Submitted

Really good! I thought that the sentences changing worked really well most of  the time, but when they were in the middle of another sentence it was a bit disorienting because it was hard to know exactly what was the text inserted. Maybe if it was in italic it would help.

Developer

Thank you for that feedback! I'll mess with it a bit, because that's def. an accessibility concern I hadn't thought about. 

Submitted(+1)

This was very nice, I liked how the questions and sentences changed when you clicked on them!

Developer

Thank you! This was my first time playing with that effect, and I wanted to use it to adjust the rhythm of the story and demonstrate the internal conflict of the player character. 

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Great but short story. I wasn't expecting it to be as emotional/sweet as it was!

EDIT: I also appreciated the seamless lack of mention of a character for the main character.

Developer

Thank you very much! It came from a very personal place for me, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.