"I would like to express my appreciation to everyone who provided feedback on my first published game. My primary goal was to release the game without exceeding the scope or getting burnt out. I hope my efforts were evident, and I appreciate your understanding and support."
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office chores's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| How well does the game fit the themes? | #15 | 3.308 | 3.308 |
| Overall | #18 | 2.892 | 2.892 |
| Visuals | #18 | 3.077 | 3.077 |
| How much do you enjoy the game overall? | #19 | 2.692 | 2.692 |
| Audio | #19 | 2.769 | 2.769 |
| Gameplay | #21 | 2.615 | 2.615 |
Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How long was your dev time?
1 day 22hours
Comments
Good game, especially since it looks like this is your first one!
A couple of easy tweaks to make the game feel and play better:
- The character feels slippery! There were times that I tried to turn and the character kept going in the same direction, like he was on ice. For a game like this, I think making the character start/stop instantly would make more sense. Or at least turn the sliding down a lot.
- Try not to hide books behind the counter in the bottom! It was hard to figure out where the last red book on the first level was hiding.
- The last level was very challenging. Just an extra second or two would make a big difference.
- Your counter seems to break after the first level. It still counts correctly, but the color and the words are incorrect (picture below).
Really great job! I played it to the end, and I think your art looks much better than mine! 😄
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