Really funky art style that I love :D It was a joy to meet each new character, and the story was fun to read through. I played it last night so I can't remember the exact quote but there was a line in there to do with D&D that made me laugh, haha. 

Also, it's awesome that you guys are family working together! I wish my brother would work with me cos he loves video games, but instead, he kinda just mocks me for making VNs cos he doesn't think they're proper games >.<

The script could have used a bit of editing, but the art is impressive. It's all very clean and has a ton of personality.

I didn't have any issue with false malware positives.

Exposition needs some work; the only character that I could root for was killed off in the first three minutes. The cartoon style is nice.

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