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A jam submission

Withered TracksView game page

A game quickly made for the ScreamJam2023
Submitted by PatchyMcCatchy, Notisle β€” 9 hours, 43 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Aesthetics#104.5004.500
Horror#513.4173.417
Story#763.2503.250
Sound Design#1223.1673.167
Enjoyment (Best Game)#2182.6672.667

Ranked from 12 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

  • I understand there's some patching to do, but the foundation this hand-drawn adventure is done brilliantly. The art is incredibly professional and distinctive and worth harnessing to fine-tune into a finished experience with a little more development!

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Art is excellent! Intro was like a comic book... loved it! I enjoyed Moon Walking through the train

Submitted(+1)

Nice intro. Only complaint about it is that the mouse faces to the right instead of left like a normal mouse. The game itself has a really interesting style, it would be nice if there was more stuff to click on. I was expecting to get more information about stuff when I clicked on it, but it didn't do anything. Still a pretty solid entry though.

Submitted(+1)

As others have said the art style is great!

Submitted(+1)

The visuals were great!
The only things was it was kinda annoying to click the black screens to move onto the next ones...

Submitted(+1)

Very nice visuals and amazing intro.

Submitted(+1)

I haven't been able to use the key on the door, am I missing something? Either way, love the intro, super efficient storytelling and cool art!

Developer

The story behind the key is abit silly as there shouldve been a door but we realized too late that the room was too small for our door asset so we just made a detection when you go through as long as the key i enabled.

Submitted(+1)

The introduction is incredible ! But I got a bug while exploring the train, the message β€œthe smell is horrible” would not disappear, and I could not click anything anymore. But super experience nonetheless !

Developer(+1)

Thanks for playing. Im glad that you enjoyed the game

Submitted(+2)

The art is incredible, I really like the premise as well, really creepy seeing the change in lighting etc. Took me a little while to find my way through but I really enjoyed my time in the game. Great work!

Submitted(+1)

Beautiful art style!

Submitted(+1)

Really loved the comic style strip at the beginning, it looks so professional ! Neat adventure game, nice work!

Developer

Thanks for playing our game ,our artist put lots of work inside this

(+1)

This is an awesome game! Beautiful, it must have taken you so long!- Admittedly a bit more instruction would be nice? So the phone could say "You need to wait for it to charge, maybe do something else." so ya not waiting for it...and maybe faster speed walk. But sick music, awesome graphics, great game guys!

Developer

Im glad you were able to enjoy it. Yes i forgot that players need some more informations and the graphics are all work of my friend Tatoni Fall as the soundtrack is from KurtyKurt