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A jam entry

Lost ToyView game page »

Submitted by Technomagie with 12 hours, 53 minutes before the deadline

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw score
Playability#24.0004.000
Thought Provoking#63.0003.000
Judge's Persoanl Approval Rank#62.6672.667
Overall#73.1113.111
Mapping#73.0003.000
Creativity#83.3333.333
Entertainment#122.6672.667

Ranked from 3 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Jam Judge (Edited 1 time) (+1)

Decent game. Found 1 mapping error, at the dragon statue the character is walking above its head. Else the map was very sci-fi, not bad! Also decent dialogues. Sometimes I wish they were more unique and lively. Some people can get bored fast from reading (like me included), so when you repeatingly read "Full of clothes", then you want only already move on. Background Sounds were well chosen imo. In all seems like a good intro for a greater story.

(+1)

Done! Well, after the wings grow, i was certain that i'm inside the VR program with my brother. Right?
A feel like this is a 'cap 1' of a story.

Developer

It's a little open-ended, I was kind of half asleep when I came up with the idea for this. I might make something a bit more concrete and expand the story and world I have in my head, but it's hard to say right now... Thank you for playing!

(+1)

Eh, this was alright.  It seems like you were going for an exploration-based story told visually.  The 3 hallways in the beginning that look somewhat similar but have clear differences is nice--I really like that, though it is a bit tedious using the arrow keys.

But the story really falls apart because (1) it quickly turns into a fetch quest with exposition dumps, and (2) I don't know this story or its characters very well, and the game didn't do much to tell me about them.  The goal is unclear from the start, and I have no idea who this character is, what she wants, etc.  This makes the story fall entirely flat, and the final choice especially is meaningless to me as a player--does this girl want a normal life or to find her brother that we don't know about?  I have no clue, and you certainly didn't tell me, so, frankly, I have no investment in the choice at all.

Overall, it's ok.  Some good visual storytelling, but the writing definitely could use some work.

Developer

Thank you!